oh god
that was so sad. and so beautiful...
oh, draco!

I LOVE this story. You should write more crazy Draco. I like him:)

Gruesome, grizzly, gah. This is so, so well imagined. I hope you don't often think of things this dark.

Oh my god. Just... brilliant. Genius. So well written, so bleak, but... beautiful.

When he thought he would tell Narcissa that she was his favorite mother, I almost started to cry. This story is haunting and horrible and beautiful.

Still, I think you might've taken it a couple of scenes too far. Once Draco has degenerated as much as he's going to (the gremlins) he's got nowhere else to go, and the story loses something but continues for four or so more scenes afterwards. Downward spirals can be interesting so long as you stop once we hit rock-bottom.

Trapping him in there with Lucius - oh my god.

-K

I like this. It does a fabulous job of describing the abstract, the undescribable.

There no words. You killed me dead. God God... I want to believe there's hope at the end but all that I can think of is madness and Lucius and God... Draco.

AH.

you're so good at writing.

Oh, this is *dark*. It's amazingly powerful and so, so sad. *sniffle* This is a breathtaking, heartwrenching, heartbreaking piece of fanfic. It's brilliant, it really is.

oh you're giving me chills! god i love you're stories. their just my type! scary, sad, angsty... ah... it feels like heaven... you make me want to write more! when i finally get to a certain point in my story, it's gonna get REAL angty! i'm dying to write it!

luv the chapter dear.

freakstar the super freak

Creepy! I love the imagery, especially the rope creaking and Lucius' milky eyes. Insane!Draco is the ultimate fangirl fantasy, to be sure :D

That's really good.

Terrific! Chilling and unbearable to read and so good. (Unusually and unexpected descriptions (metaphors) make it more raw – it do work)

Chilling descent into madness and down and down...