I love the way you wrote this, the vagueness is perfect and your description of Orochimaru is spot on haha

its really very good

You write OroSasu so well! That last paragraph was just wonderful, there was so much tension in it. I'll fav this one as well :)

Nice job. I like it. Hooray for Sasuke torture! I love the guy, but it's just so *easy*...

Make sure you don't get the words "sennin" and "sannin" confused, though. "Sennin" means "hermit," while "sannin" means "three ninjas," as in The Legendary Three - Orochimaru, Jiraiya, and Tsunade...

That was amazing. I loved reading just every bit of it. I loved how you personified each of them, and really made it seem...I don't know the word for it. But this was awesome. It showed how sadistic Orochimaru can be, making Sasuke feel the way he did and loving his ability to do so. And showed Sasuke as maybe beginning to think perhaps it was a mistake, but he knows he can't do anything about it, and has some regrets.

Not to mention the fact that you have such a clear writing style and the way it all flows is just beatiful. It was so great to read, easy and enjoyable. Also in need of more reads, so thank you for writing this great piece. Years, ago, but what the hey, I just found it now. So major Kudos and such, this was just grand.

Interesting premise! :) And your summary is rather interesting. I like how it ties into the conclusion. Very creative.

Do you know what I think? I think these "obscure" things Orochimaru says and does that Sasuke says go unnoticed by others...aren't actually intended to be sexually enticing. At least not by Orochimaru. Sasuke reads things into whatever Orochimaru says in order to sooth himself...give Orochimaru a reason for wanting his body (sexually). Of course, Orochimaru would be the sadistic type to tease Sasuke and toy with his psyche...

I don't know. (: Interesting idea; thought provoking. Added to favs.

Mou .. why so short? Yeah, it was good. You got Orochimaru IC there .. _