| Reviews for TimeStorm |
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Mizuki06 chapter 8 . 4/1 This was everything I wanted! Always a wes/eric fan and recently got hooked with cam/hunter and this gave me both! Such a gem! Appreciate yall for writing! |
Hariken Hero chapter 5 . 3/25/2011 I dont know how many times I've reiterated this but I'm totally digging the interaction between between Hunter and Eric! Especially the 'stick' part. I'm not dirty-minded but on a different angle it has its own interpretation. And I just knew that was Cyber Cam! I really like his casual home-y dialogue. |
Hariken Hero chapter 4 . 3/25/2011 Good chapter! Nice to see the situation for the captured ninjas plus the sensei. And also the appearance of Trip! And great to see the interaction between the soft guys(Cam&Wes) and hardheaded guys(Hunter&Eric)! |
Hariken Hero chapter 3 . 3/17/2011 I can just simply imagine Wes giving that empathetic stare at Cam! It's been a long time since I watched Time Force so I'm still a little vague with Wes' and Eric's personalities. All I very firmly remember that there's bromance btwn Wes and Eric in the show.. Anyway great chapter! They've finally found out Lothor's hideout and the fight scenes are awesome! And lovin' Eric's lines! "..we dont need fancy powers" and the repetitive "We're back at square one". Priceless lines! |
Hariken Hero chapter 2 . 3/17/2011 I have never read a Wes/Eric fic before but that rauchy part with them was really hot. I can totally imagine Eric as the dominant person in the relationship. And the tension between Hunter and Eric was...*_* |
Hariken Hero chapter 1 . 3/17/2011 Interesting prologue. Clever plot and well-written descriptions of characters. I like how you describe Frax as 'having no hesitation' because of 'devoid of human nerves'. Frax was in character and how he valued his cyclobots over Lothor was just brilliant. Good job! |
LeviSqueaks chapter 8 . 1/20/2009 Wow! I really loved this story! The way that Hunter and Eric interacted was perfect. I might get you to read a bit of my own writings of their interactions for one of my stories later on! I could def use the advice! I totally enjoyed thanks for writing this wonderful spec! |
welleg chapter 8 . 9/13/2007 Great story. I really, really love Eric's line at the end. |
the real vampire chapter 8 . 11/7/2005 Oh wow! Great ending to a great story. I really enjoyed reading this - you guys make a great team! One of the best end-lines I have ever read: 'On one condition. We hide the cars in the back, turn off the phones, and disconnect the doorbell. Just in case.' LOL! Can't wait to read the spin-off and hope to read more from both of you soon! |
Funky In Fishnet chapter 8 . 11/7/2005 LOL great finishing chapter, it really made me smile so much! I can't wait to read more of you guys teaming up! Really fabulous story, thanks for posting :- ) |
stranj100 chapter 8 . 11/6/2005 Sequel, sequel, sequel. Oh...sorry, I'll try to restrain myself. I loved it. You guys did great. I hope you guys team up again, soon. |
XRachX chapter 8 . 11/6/2005 Brilliant. Funny and sweet and just downright awesome. This last chapter is just a mix of aw's and laughs. Fab story and I think I've just found two new slash pairings to follow. Thanks guys. |
robster72 chapter 8 . 11/6/2005 I love the quote - "You put the master of evil space ninjas in a birdcage?" Very funny! I'm sorry this story's over I hope you two will be writing some more soon? |
AngelMouse5 chapter 8 . 11/6/2005 An excellent, nice, well written finale to this great story. I agree with Wes, poor Lothor, stuck in that cage - freezing would be better... I loved the rapport that you built between Hunter and Eric - mutual respect in their abilities and eventual friendliness... great work guys, really great work. I will definately want this to be hosted on The Lair. |
germankitty aka Dagmar Buse chapter 8 . 11/6/2005 Cute. :) It's amazing how you kept everyone in character; very well done. I'm really looking forward to the one-shot sequel you mentioned. (Btw, discovered one typo: "...to bid their farewells, lead by Sensei, who had streaked...". It -should- be "led". *grins, winks*) |