This story is so good!

very nice

Beautifully written and éloquent

This was beautiful.

Oh I really l really loved this.

how i wish that how mamoru and usagi found love with each other in the anime would be similar in the manga; and more closely reflected to this fic
here's to hoping that it would be the case for the relaunch

wow, that was very pretty. great job!

so good!

aww this was soo cute! cant wait to read the next chapter! loved it! love the secrecy and love the intimatcey.

Very graceful and well-written! Amazing characterization and the ever-loved element of longing. :D Love it!

that so beautiful! thank you

This was so beautiful... Thank you for writing it and posting it for me to read.

Your writing is lovely and your drawings are beautiful.

Ah, my dear: "How I love thee, let me count the ways"... This is an incredibly beautiful peice and I'm not sure how I missed it before now. I'm sorry that you had to bring my attention to it!

I don't want to say this will be the greatest fic of your life, as I expect more from you _-, however it is definately the greatest of what you have posted. You have sown the beauty of art into this piece, thread by thread.

There is such a soft, romantic tone to this that it's just absolutely amazing... Like looking at a painting of the countryside... all peaceful and endearing to the soul trapped in the city.

We'll let a little honesty slip in here... I was not so sure of the ending the first time I read it. I thought it rather abrupt. However, as I was reading it I was being distracted so I sat down again today to read it once more and provide you a proper responce ) And now that I have no distraction and read the whole thing start to finish-I must say it's even more beautiful (and the ending more fitting) than I had thought previously.

You have certainly outdone yourself with this fic, Eli-chan. HOWEVER, I know you have thoughts of a SereEndy fic and I want to see that one. I think if you committed as you did to this one, you could write an amazingly intricate, passionate, and yet subtle fic. Which are the strong points on this one, btw. P But, as I'm rambling, I'm going to say this was absolutely marvelous, my sweet, and I hope to see more of your art-either medium.

This story was amazing, adorable, beautiful, perfect. There are so many words to describe it but so little use. I loved this story. It was very well written and I envy author's like you, who can portray their feeling so well. Ii wanna read some more stories that you've written, so keep it up!