That was incredible . You could taste the feelings the pain the ache and the love behind everything . Loved it so much There is not enough writers like this for Michael and Sara .

Can you post the other chapters please? I just love the story, and can't find it anywhere else now that was taken down.

great story :) i really enjoyed it.

Oh... delight.

Bliss.

THANK YOU!

That was really great. But I do have to nitpick just a little. Sara did see Michael smile while he was in prison; and correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't remember him gettign shot during the breakout. Other than that I loved it.

aw. :(

i don't suppose you're coming back to this ever?

good job!

iloveit!

Brilliant. Probably the best MiSa fic I have ever read!

This was great. You're a good writer! I can't wait to read the rest of this story.

So sad, but good.

I dont recall Michael getting shot in any of the episodes. Did I miss something? Or is his getting shot just a fanfiction thing? because in a lot of fanfiction, he's been shot... you cn reply back to this review, or email me at Thanks!

That was really a great story. You set it well and your style is good. Can't wait for more, please! And keep your good work on!

That was awesome and I absolutely loved it, although I hate that Michael will leave her, but hey, what else can happen between them? Great story!

A great start to what I'm sure is going to be a great story! I can't wait to read the next few parts. I felt like I was Sara in the dim-lit room-you captured the mood perfectly. Fantastic writing!