Reviews for Choosing
Merinus chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
I'm afraid to tell you, if you didn't know, that this story of yours, "Choosing", goes against the policy of this site. This site states in its list of works it won't allow based on other authors or publishers, "FanFiction respects the expressed wishes of the following authors/publishers and will not archive entries based on their work: Anne Rice, Archie comics[…]". If you really have to have this story up on the net, then upload it to DeviantArt or ArchiveofOurOwn or another site. So be a good lamb and delete this story from this site, or I will go on and tell someone who I know will take it down.
k.canspiner chapter 2 . 7/9/2018
Please continue the story. It was a really good one. And I really want to know what will happen next. Love, xoxo
mihikarow chapter 2 . 9/23/2017
I love the story. Please Update.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/10/2017
Betty needs to wake up and realize that Veronica is not her friend...always critisizing her for what she wears, telling her to move it, always stealing Archie away from Betty and making excuses, instead of saying I'm sorry.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2017
Archie needs to see the error of his ways. Is he really so stupid to see that he's hurting Betty.
tinkermist99 chapter 2 . 6/25/2017
plz update
FuN FiFi chapter 2 . 9/29/2015
Great start! I'm loving your spot-on portrayals of the main characters so far! I wish you'd come back to finish this fic one day...it's too good to let it stay this way!
chr1steh chapter 2 . 4/6/2015
Awwww incomplete! I'm always looking for more Bughead so I wish there was more to this story!
Where chapter 2 . 2/16/2015
When are the new chapters coming out?
lejeuparfait chapter 2 . 4/27/2014
Ack, it started before it got any good. Unfortunately, I don't think you'll be back to update it anytime soon...
Im a Castle fan chapter 2 . 4/12/2014
Are you planning on continuing this story?
RRgirl chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Jughead seems out of character- he needs a bit more development (more disillusionment and upsetness at Archie, more time really to develop your spin on the character) before you make him say "you disappoint me, Arch..." the phrase and lines afterwords seem really awkward for the character right off the bat. Basically in a first chapter the only idea we have of Jughead is from the comics, because a different Jughead hasn't been developed-and doesn't have time to develop-in one short first chapter. Really that's a line/tone of character to use after setting up the story more (3rd chapter I would say? maybe more because your chapters are short) so we have a better idea on who your Jughead is.
Hope this helps :)
thedreadedlurgy chapter 2 . 3/22/2009
good job. you've gotten a lot of reviews.

surprised you stopped.
Ronnie343 chapter 2 . 5/11/2008
Wow! I'm really enjoying this! Update soon!
maybe.forever.xx chapter 2 . 3/15/2008
I like this quite a bit, it's original and... well, amazing.

I love how you portrayed Betty and Veronica's friendship.

Please continue on with this story.
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