I think that you have a great story going here, but the fact that you have not added anything in so long is a major negative. I think you might want to clarify some of the characters and there alters especially Koruma.

Nice...Like the work, keep at it, i'd like to hear more later on.

Awesome story! This has a lot of potential...seriously Keep it up

like it

amasing story, first fanfiction i have tread for scryed and it makes me hopefull for tohers, keep updating

Hey!

Ur story is really great! how'd u get the idea? When's the next instalment gona be? lol

shit this is trouble

Wow, that was cool! Just don't throw Koruma into anything too impossible just yet. That would take the enjoyment out of the fic too soon. Have some opponents he can beat the crap out of before throwing him into the impossible situations. That was part of the fun in the first sCRYed, let's not ruin things by moving too fast.

Dude, I have two words. Update. NOW!

My favorite SCryed fanfic written thus far. I strongly encourage you to continue it...I know I'm hoping you shall.

This would be a great story if you finished it. Hopefully you get started on it again.

this story is cool givin mujo the same powers as kanami and he still had his powers. koruma is kazumas son and hes strong and he just got his powers plus his alter is the complete opposite of his father but the is the daugter of ryuho and her alter is stong but big but the color of there alter are similer. you have to make another chapter cause this one was awsome.

this story is tight and real the auther is great

So sad..sniff..sniff

quite frankly i didnt like some of the language..too graphical violence, i mean the rest is well written..its just..yeah :/