You writing is lovely, and is the best I have come across in this fandom. I wish that you had continued to write more, but I understand real life often unexpectedly intervenes.

Well, it's Godfrey's own damn fault for getting smashed out of his mind. Considering the circumstances, I'm very glad he did.

You do very well with characterization-I could completely picture all of the characters saying the lines you gave them.

Well done.

Cheers,

Icey.

Slick as ice and twice as chilling! Your darkly amusing take on the war effort is delightful. I especially enjoyed the characterization of Tiberias, a much under-represented fellow on fanfiction. Why is it that the most sensual men of the film have the least amount of fans? It's a mystery and a crime, my dear Cornix. I shall be looking at your other fictions in due course because I truly admire your writing style.

Excellent story! Will there be another chapter?

I love the way you manage to write the Hospitaller's character... he's a toughie to write, I think! Tiberias, too... :)

Hello, I like your story a lot, but your first chapter is the same as your second. I hope you update soon.

Thank you all! I’m thrilled – that is the first story I ever published on the Net (tho’ not the first I wrote, of course). Writing for this fandom came as a bit of a surprise, to put it mildly.

lateBloomer04, I’m reasonably certain that Balian will turn up at some stage, but it may be a while. Rayakina, I hope you won’t be too disappointed – the way I read this it’s Godfrey who is the surrogate father, Tiberias is something else entirely. You'll see!

This is so absolutely wonderful - all my favourite, underrepresented characters here together (Hospitaller, Godfrey, Tiberias). I've been LONGING for a Tiberias-Godfrey friendship fic, and you've written it so perfectly. Wonderful characterisation of all three. Thanks for sharing this gem.

Well-written and highly enjoyable! Yes, it's movie-verse, but it's good, maturely-written movie-verse.

Oh, gorgeous, a new KoH fic with all my favourite characters! I like the way you describe their comradeship and their drinking together. I've always wondered about what might actually have caused Godfrey to seek his son after so many years, and your explanation is a very good one. Tiberias, frustrated and sad, who can no longer stand hearing about Godrey's tale about his son while he helplessly has to watch his own "son" dying.. Hearbreaking. Yes, I very much like the short passages describing the kind of father-son-relationship between Tiberias and Baldwin. "He could still feel the light touch of those white-gloved fingers on his arm." What a bittersweet, touching detail...! Thank you for writing this!

This is brilliant! Finally there is more KOH fic that I can actually sink my teeth into. Thank you so much for writing this...I wish the movie had gone into more detail about the comraderie between those three. Please continue...I can't wait to meet Balian! :D