| Reviews for With Ease |
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Hikari-Kayko chapter 1 . 5/28/2005 *uncontrollable laughter* that was cute, and funny. more pleaz! _ ~HIKARi |
JD chapter 1 . 9/8/2002 Very interesting, different, and good, but I think it was a bit rushed. You'd think Delenn and Lenneir would have been a little more skocked and gotten Stephen or something. But good anyway. Can't wait to read more. |
TeAmaHowieSiempre chapter 1 . 6/23/2001 OMG, this was fantastic. I can't wait to hear what's going to happen next between them. I wish something mroe would've happened on the show! |
Ice Princess24 chapter 1 . 6/12/2001 this is a great story! you write great and i've always been a fan of ressurecting marcus and i hope that you write more stories in the furure! ) |
pol chapter 1 . 6/9/2001 how can you leave me hanging like that? hurry up. pleeeeeaseeeeeeee. |
Polaris Northernstar chapter 1 . 5/28/2001 Very heart warming but a little mushy with the dialog, and did we have to get into the sex thing at the end? It would have been nicer if you had just left it at the kiss, over all it was pretty good. |
Sage London chapter 1 . 5/12/2001 MORE! |
Dreamtyme chapter 1 . 5/9/2001 What a wonderful start to this story...I can't wait to read more :-) |
Bellemaine Chercoeur chapter 1 . 5/7/2001 Lovely story, thank you for bringing him back. Dialogue was well written and in character, as was the Minbari ceremony. Hope to find more of your work! |
Okat chapter 1 . 4/28/2001 This is the story we all want to write, isn't it? Unfortunately, it's very easy for the plot to become contrived. I mean, he comes back and boom! they just have sex? Where's the emotion? The angst? The characterisation is all wrong. They're just far too light hearted at the end. The style needs some work, and the tenses keep changing. |
Guinan chapter 1 . 4/26/2001 Aaaahh finally a new Marcus/Susan story! Nicely written, am looking forward to reading more. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2001 _ Heh heh... JUST WRITE MORE! Neeed mooore... *drools* I'm back into B5, heh heh... oh and this fic was good. |
DragonMouse chapter 1 . 4/23/2001 wow. that waz good. i love those two. great. ~( 8 |
dmc chapter 1 . 4/22/2001 this is a great stroy. i sure hope theres more to come. keep up the good work. : ) |
Moon Bunnynot signed in chapter 1 . 4/20/2001 Very very well done, I like Susan and Marcus' charateration a whole whole bunch in this :-) You switched tenses a bit in the story, you might want to watch out for that. It was a wonderful story, and I am looking foward to more! Keep writing ! |