Love that he calls Mick "the boy" (

Nice story! A little hard to understand if you haven't seen the corresponding episode. But I have, and I really enjoyed this one. Also, the overall tone was great. No sappiness. It sounded just like Nine!

This is great! Captures the 9th Doctor very well :)

Good story.

This tiny, insightful story flows so beautifully. It says so much with so little words and really feels like a wonderful punch in the gut.

Oh, that's so lovely. Thank you for sharing this.

Lovely work. There's something so appealing in the simpleness of this piece and what it implies.

Sweet.

But I didn't get what was happening with the second-last section? Was that the bit where he was looking for the transmitter and looks at a giant ferris wheel no less than three times before realising why she keeps looking at it?

Don't stop it there!

It's good. Feels just right. I love the details and the train of tought. It blends so perfectly in to the main story and adds to it. Thank you for sharing your talent. Fantastique.

Excellent fic! Just the right length for a one shot, and compares Rose to Romana in ways that I've never thought about before.

Fantastic!

Hey, I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought Rose sort of resembled Romana! I'm extra glad that you decided to write a story about it. :) Good one, too. Well done, nice job.

A very, very nice fic. It worked perfectly, with lots of great little ideas and details. :D

I adored this fic, it has a great sense of atmosphere and I love how the Doctor compared Rose to Romana (now that you mention it, I can see the similarity!). It really made me smile a lot so thank you for sharing it! Keep it up :- )