Jun/Yayoi's love is undoubtedly the MOST touching one in Captain Tsubasa series.

I love the Field Prince's personality. For Jun - a guy who is so devastatingly handsome, rich, at the same time talented, kind and dedicated, there is no way he could abandon his one and only Yayoi - the one who has always been there for him during his hard time and such. For Yayoi, she has willingly sacrificed everything, even her pride when she begged Tsubasa to do her favor, to be with her first love even when he didn't know about her feelings and return it; and she has been seen by his side ever after. She loves him and he loves her much, very VERY MUCH, and considering everything they had been through together for more than 10 years, their bond has become so hard, so deep that the two are absolutely inseparable.

Truly speaking, I have adored this couple for more than 10 years, ever since I started reading Captain Tsubasa during my Junior High-school, I'm a university graduate now and I still cannot stop loving it.

Thank you for writing this fic, even if it's not a happy ending for both of them. I believe Yayoi will never love anyone more than she loves him in this life and even when his body is no longer by her side, he soul will surely be. Ever.

Hei. I repeat, it's great. Poor Yayoi, and poor Jun's teammates. I loved the ghost xD well, I'm not terrified because this story, but it's great. Thank you. Heippa.

*Samael*

Great start! I think I reviewed the wrong way...

Whatever!I loved the story... Jun died... poor Yayoi...

WOW!

This story is so cool!

Whoa... dedicated to me? Thanks you so much! It was really great! Drama and horror blended together!

Great story!

Aw... it is great, it almost made me cry! Poor Jun! T.T (I like him) Well, what can I say... It's Yayoi, not Yaoi.

I would like to translate this to Spanish, could I? Send me and e-mail with your answer please. My e-mail address is at my profile.

Take care of yourself. Heippa.

*Samael*

Aw... Poor Yayoi.. Anou, your spelling for her name name is incorrect. it's "Yayoi" not "Yaoi", yaoi is-uh- I'll bet all of you know that!

Anyways, godspeed to you and your chapters! Wish you luck! It was really great!