i really enjoyed reading this story. just wish it was still being updated. did you die? if i don't get a reply i can only assume you did.

Aw it's no fun when Ed doesn't win...

i STRONGLY suggest you make a sort of dividing line to show when the story switches scenes because i'm reading...i'm reading...i'm reading...i'm confused. i'm reading...i'm reading...i'm reading... oh! i get it! it's just confusing without some sort of thing to divide the scenes. it's just a suggestion though. just a strong suggestion. :D

I was very excited to find this story; this isn't the first time I've read it and I've had part of the first meeting between Ed and Roy and then Ed's subsequent report running through my head for days. As the only other thing I could really remember about the story was that Ed returned from beyond the gate it took me quite some time to find it again. I find the commentary between Roy and Ed extremely entertaining.

You're a very talented writer and have definetly captured the various characters accurately. Good job and keep it up!

oh wow. i really love this

please continue and update soon

OMG! This story is so AWESOME! XD I wish I could write as well as you do. ; Keep up the great work! PLEASE update soon!

hr you write a very good story , don't stop here , i want to read the sequel

Okay, no getting off with just a preview. FYI, you are a brilliant writer. Edward's personality and actions are perfect, and danged if Mustang and Alphonse aren't perfect either. This is really well done and I love it. Update when you can but know that you're doing an excellent job. He's definately done some growing up while he was away but it's still the Ed we love. Thanks for being both creative and proud enough top post this! "Ja'ne!"

Oh man...you've gotta update!

...please?xD

I shall be waiting, indeed!

~Sami, aka Hi Tetsu

Wow this is pretty good

Wow. This is a very good story. Please update as soon as possible. I cant wait to see what happens next!

Just to let you know, it was World War II in the movie. That was about the time the uranium bomb was created and also if you noticed in the movie, they mentioned the Treaty of Versailles which screwed Germany over from World War I. I wasn't sure if anyone told you that, but yeah, it was World War II in the movie.

i love your story...but its been awhile since you updated...update as soon as you can

Such a mean place to end it, leaving us all hanging. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

okay, I know you might have it finished, and I kinda just breezed over the first chapter (or prolouge?) because it is late, but it sounds interesting, and I hope to read the whole thing.

Um, also, I was wondering if you could give any thoughts on mine? you sound like a well-rounded author and I hope to have your opinion

hope to talk with you soon!

-Tsubasa's Wings