Reviews for Visions of Temptation
Subtilior chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
Oh ... creepy ...

I have to say, I have one bit of crit, though. I was getting into the Tarot images, really imagining them etched against the stars, or floating in the midst of the wrecked Escher room (the 'woman and man reaching for each other in an arch') - anyway, I was really digging them ...

... and I'm sorry to say that the word "plethora" kicked me straight out of the reverie. :/ Not that I don't know what it means. It's just a very clinical word, in the midst of the picture you are painting.

... But that's a very small thing. I read your "Corruption" at the 31 Days community - I wish you would post it here, and/or complete it! Because it was also quite nicely creepy. I hope to read more Labyrinth works from your pen/keyboard ...
Coronfrim Crelumin chapter 1 . 11/23/2005
Bits of it I liked, other bits... to be hinest, I thought some bits were just a little too surreal to still make much sense. Maybe that's what you were going for, I dunno. But not all of it really appealed to me.

Thar. A review. Just like I promised.