Okay. So you kinda sorta, like, HAVE to update this. Just sayin'.

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I hope you continue this

omg! Continue soon

Is this going to be updated soon? I really want to see Angela's reaction!

So, there were some grammatical errors, but basically, you just added my two favorite things in the whole world together, and that is slash and mscl!

Thank you soo much for this story, I can't wait to see how it ends!

Keep up the good work!

Did Angela see them? UPDATE!

Ack, dude. I can only imagine what Angela's thinking...

Like the pairing, though. It's so bizarre it works, y'know? But I think-and this is only constructive criticism-I think maybe you should go a bit slower. We still don't know Jordan's intentions, and Brian's crush on him was kinda... spontaneous. Maybe you should just take some time to show their feelings a bit more. Just some friendly advice, lol.

Update soon; you've got me hooked!

You really know how to write Brian...this is great.

i want more ;)

I thought the ending (like the last line) could have been better but very squeeable! _ hehe! We need more of these on here!

W00t its mscl slash. Such a rare treat. I liked it.

-. I like it. But, I don't think Brian would acknowledge his gay-ness so easily. But maybe that's just me. Also, it seems like he liked Jordan for the same reasons Angela, and practically thought the same things. That Angela did.

"Finally he walked in and sat down, slouching perfectly." My favourite line!

Does that mean that's all? Will there be more? and what about Angela? You got my attention!

Well, I don't know the fandom, but the fic made me squee anyway, which says quite a bit about your writing. In fact, I'm still squeeing! *laughs* It was adorable.

Of course you know I love this LOL! I still need to watch another eppie of mscl... anyways, write some more! Moi shall be happy if you do!

Dana