The story is good, I just think you should seperate the paragraphs to make it easier to read. And yes, I think you should continue this. Don't make like 10 more chapters, but I think you could fit in a few more. Like if you add another one, you should decide if Zakuro and Minto will tell the others about their relationship, or how they act towards each other in the cafe. You should try and update!

That's a nice story after all, but also half make me confused. You got to re-read your story, since there's some grammatical errors..

Btw, 1 question. They kissing after the other left or before they left? Thta's the one I think confused me. Thx.. *Fav*

Chapters 2 and 3 become very difficult to read with the enormous paragraphs. I'd suggest breaking up the content into smaller chunks.

This is a very good story so far. Keep it up!