Reviews for Birthday
Guest chapter 5 . 5/7/2016
No, Vimes knows very rudimentary dwarfish! Remember The Fifth Elephant? See, no problems at all... ;) ps:got your back boyo
The man looking from da corner chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Great first chapter ! Your style isnt' unlike Pratchett's, I like the line about reading over Carrot shoulder. Good job !
CarrieVS chapter 5 . 3/14/2010
Either you are madder than my friend Gingerbread, or you really were tired when you wrote this.

Verging on the incoherent, but what I managed to decipher was pretty good.
Apurva chapter 3 . 5/29/2009
Back for more :D

"and then something pale and blonde streaked(2) out of the room"

You blow me away. You really do. That was BRILLIANT. I laughed out loud SO many times reading this! It was amazing!
Apurva chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Oh I loved it I loved it I loved it! You captured the essence so perfectly! Cant wait to read more! *rubs hands in glee*
slavetothekeyboard chapter 5 . 10/27/2008
...IT'S SO SWEET AND WELL WORDED! I think I have blueberry muffins...
LittleSallyDigby chapter 5 . 4/4/2007
You're a freakin' genius. This was very romantic and true to all the characters, not to mention hilarious. I read it around 1 AM, and as a measure of the comedy, there were times when I was worried I might wake up everyone else in the house with my laughter. And it's hard to make me laugh out loud.

When I can write this well, I'm going to start submitting work to publishers...
thesistersaustere chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
Ooh, this sounds exciting! I can't wait to read the rest!
Prefect Rachel chapter 5 . 12/14/2006
Hah! Only in dwarfish would "I am a chocolate cheesecake" imply that you deserved to be hit in the head with a dwarf bagel. Fantastic and incredibly sweet. Thanks!
InsanityInside chapter 5 . 12/3/2006
Hmm... Carrots, chocolate and fish? Sounds rather... unusual, but... well... I like it.

II(:
older and amused chapter 5 . 10/1/2006
i loved it! it was funny, and not TOO cliche' romantic! it's brilliant!
beko chapter 5 . 9/13/2006
Haven't read any DW fanfiction for a while, so it makes me all the happier to find such a nice and well written and fluffy one CA rules! Write more~
reviewer chapter 5 . 8/22/2006
*gives you chocolate cheesecake*

Will you please write more? This was absolutely hillarious. great job.
reviewer chapter 2 . 8/22/2006
Me again. I have to give you your props. That birthday song scene had me in stitches laughing. Well done.

And that would be the typical dwarf birthday song. Poor Cheery.
reviewer chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
I stayed away awhile because the summary worried me, but it turns out this is a great fic.

In answer to your question, Carrot is 16 in Guards!Guards!, and each subsequent book happens about a year after the previous one, so if you've set this shortly after Thud!, Carrot's most likely about to turn 23.
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