Haha, it's funny that even Atlantis thinks Kavanaugh is a pain in the tookus. This sounds like an awesome beginning to a series. Will be checking out any other stories you might have

Just found this story. Loved it!

This is perfect.

defiantly cool

are you going to write a little oneshot or two when Atlantis finally gets the required power so she can talk to the people?

This is lovely! You should write more on this. I would love to see a situation where the city actually has a voice.

She wants to take care of people. She just wants to help.

Atlantis is well written, you made the city seem alive without resorting to cliche.

This is so cool. I really like it.

beautiful! but not big on John/Rodney

Cool! This certainly is an interesting little piece - I really enjoyed it! Wonderfully done. I just wonder how everyone would react if Atlantis started talking to them? Oh, and, nice touch mentioning McKay/Sheppared. -

Happy Halloween!

- Em

This was great. I've always thought of Atlantis having some sort of intelligence, it's nice to know I'm not the only one. This truly grasped how I imagined she would view this strange new race. I love the line about Kavanagh. The last paragraph was very insightful and read true. I've always felt that way about the Ancients. I hope you will continue to write such great stories, and maybe even a sequel since they have a ZedPM now. Well, I can hope anyway.

If your interested in Rodney/John slash and friendship fics let me recommend Koschka, liketheriver, likethekoschka, ellex, and nebbyJ. These four authors are truly prolific, and write with consistency.

*stunned* wow, that was brilliant, very powerful to think that everything the atlantis team are searching for is right there. I love the idea that the city is sentiant and watches over them. Ever thought of doing a follow up where they find a ZPM?

Hello, I just wanted t say that I greatly enjoyed your "Atlantis" Fan Fic. The idea of an A.I. inside the City itself is most intriguing. I like the way you express the City's greif and and frustration at Her inability to act to help the humans and her views on Ancients prior to thier defeat. As others in the review section have stated it would be most amusing to see the Atlantis Expedition members re-actions to seeing a hologram or a communication from the City itself. It could be an interesting idea for a sequel of sometype: since the installation of the ZPM the City might find it possible too, for lack of a better word, Manifest, even if only for short periods of time. She could help them understand more of the Ancient Database, help with education, running the city. She might even know a why to recharge the ZPMs to where other ZPMS are hidden etc..Anyway, again thanks for a very interesting and well thought out pieace of Fan Fiction :).

-Mike-

I love this story, what an interesting idea. Though now I have to confess I want to see how everyone would actually react, though I also think that would ruin this. I like how you gave Atlantis a voice and how you said the Ancients lost what made them great. Yeah, now I have to see what else you wrote. )

that is so kewl. u should write a story how she ends up talking to them..but thats just an idea. Nice story by the way.

c u angelbaby10105