Nice! Thank you!

A much better ending. There was so much more that could have been done with this episode and others, and it burns me a bit that the writers/producers/creators missed all these opportunities. You write nice pieces, capturing the characters quite well.

My favourite part was "So telling you that you're the biggest jerk...flying before." So good! Also the part where she said "I told you I was stupid." Thanks for writing!

I've read this a couple of times and it cheers me up everytime. Makes me feel better - especially since I can clearly see the scenario in my head and it almost overrules the horrendous-ness that was the original scene. Thanks for putting this out there.

I SO wish the show had gone this way. I was really sad that he just said "i love you" and left. I'm glad in your fic, they were able to have an actual conversation.

Yay for second chances! I think your universe will be my new canon, lol.

And the way you ended it was perfect ... nothing was too rushed but at the same time, it gives hope for the happy ending.

Fantastic job!

Once again, the only response I have to say is: "aww..."

Why is that EVERYBODY'S response to Lit? Seriously. Literati and JavaJunkie just make everybody turn into the sappiest kooks ever.

I like everything about this, but in particular the last line struck me. "It was so much easier to watch him walk away when she knew he was coming back." Absolutely solid gold. Succinct, but it sums up everything that's excellent about Literati.

you are SO good at writing thes sences! you should've wrote them for the actual show! i wish you did! i totally wish that this actually happened

that was a million-billion-trillion-zillion times better than the real episode! I loved it!

It was so much easier to watch him walk away when she knew he was coming back. because jess always comes back, just when we least expect another seductive town hoodlum to show up, he does. it's ironic isnt it. lol. well keep wrting, i enjoy em.

-chrissy

The last line just made that story perfect.

Youre really good at this, you know? All of these are really good, good job :) Its just really sad that none of this actually happened...but...a girl can dream, eh? Anyways, awesome job! (Jess and Rory are still gonna get together...) Good luck with future stories :D

This was a very good rendition for Nag Hammadi... One of the best I've read.

I really liked the dialogue, and it was very well written. I wish this could've really happened in the show. :)

I really like this I wish it could have gone this way then but maybe it will now, a little bit late too happen but never too late I guess. Looking back what I said makes absoultley no sense but anyway your story was great and very...in Harry Potter fanfic we call it canon I'm not sure what they call it here yet but it fits characters and all that although there's a chance you also write Harry Potter and would know that anyway so I'm just going to shut up now.

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LOVE IT! Ugh! I wish that was how it happened! :( I miss Jess! You did an awesome job with the story! Keep up the good work!

cute. i liked it.