| Reviews for Inbetweeners |
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Aku Maru chapter 13 . 1/30/2012 I would love for you to return to the world of One Piece and continue on with these short stories with some of the more recent events. They are well written and entertaining. |
Melinda-chan chapter 13 . 5/4/2007 Wow, it's been such a long, long time since I last heard anything from you. Yes, I am still alive and still writing. Not too much said about this chapter, but I love it when he made Zoro lose count. :D Hope to hear from you again! |
The Flying Pen chapter 12 . 2/22/2007 Gah, curse you anthropomorphism! Curse you! *wipes tears* Were you crying when you wrote this? I have loved all of these! Please don't stop! :) ~Pen~ |
The Flying Pen chapter 5 . 2/22/2007 Wow, I'm only on Chapter 5, but I had to stop and review. I've always imagined the goings-on between the arcs... And this is excellent! Onward! ~Pen~ |
Sarkastisk chapter 12 . 5/11/2006 ok I'm not sure what 'episode' this is from :P but still it was great, (oh, du är svensk va? bara undrar :P). And don't think that you write any good XD your good, I um... *promise?* :P |
Melinda-chan chapter 12 . 4/24/2006 I really enjoyed this chapter. Doing it from the ship's perceptive was an unique approach, though I haven't still caught up with the storyline. I am glad that you're writing again. Chapter Three of "Last Resort" has been uploaded so be sure to read it. Thanks! |
thermopylae chapter 9 . 4/23/2006 Oh, Merry *sniff* Your fic with her made me ache all over again,. It was really beautiful, the way you conveyed her fondness for each of the crew members. I hope too that Merry will be miraculously restored - or that the figurehead, at least, will be saved. Future color spreads will not seem right without Merry peeping out in the background! |
Chibimono Akuno chapter 12 . 4/23/2006 That is so beautiful. It just makes my heart ache all over again for Merry. They are so much like a crew of eight instead of seven. I'd hate to see poor Merry die, though. I hope, when they return to Water 7, that Ice-ossan will have Merry ready to go once again. I can't think of the Strawhat Pirates sailing on anything but the Going Merry. And for being rusty, this is a fine piece of work! The emotion and hope are so achingly perfect. Once again, beautiful. |
Lina Darkstar chapter 11 . 3/30/2006 Very nice, all told. You have a good and light-handed grasp of Luffy, who's quite possibly the most difficult character to write for. I like your Nami as well, and hope you'll write more for her in the future. Your Robin's a bit wordy. Efficiency is important for writing her, I think- she's complex, to be sure, but she explains things in a clipped and focused manner. The more you meander, the more you veer towards Vivi. IMO. I eagerly await more. |
Saiyako chapter 11 . 2/2/2006 Beautiful... Sanji's readiness to die for Nami is touching, and his faith in his captain even more so. It's a clever idea, too, to take just those few moments when he's conscious, and I love the way it's written. I hope there'll be more of these coming, I love your short fics. |
uozlulu chapter 11 . 1/31/2006 That was a nice snipet. I really enjoyed it. Thsi description was awesome too. ~ Uozumi |
Ahja Reyn chapter 11 . 1/28/2006 YaY! I've finally finished! These are great. I think the one thing I like best about them is how they follow the genre of the anime, where it's more about the adventure and fun than about personal reflection and romance and all that other stuff. |
Ahja Reyn chapter 10 . 1/28/2006 "the last thing I hear before I am caught by the interesting story again is a surprised ‘Oops!’ and a distant splash of water, shortly followed by five other voices calling out the Captain’s name and another splash as someone dives after him." LMAO at the 'oops!' You did a good job with Robin |
Ahja Reyn chapter 9 . 1/28/2006 YaY! I like this one too! Only cuz I like Shanks/Luffy interaction for some reason...in the beginning when you mentioned Shanks getting tired of Luffy's endless questions I was all '*gasp*! No, surely not!' |
Ahja Reyn chapter 6 . 1/28/2006 LoL. This drabble is good too. I like how you showed how a story develops in Usopp's head. |