that was sweet, really cute and touching. you made their feelings come across and made me go "aaawww" w haha thanks for the fanfic!

I really like this story! The characterization is very good and believable. Keep up the good work ;}

such a sweet story

adorable

Oh, "friends," eh? XD

Poor Roy... something as little as a stubbed toe can make everything you do 10 times harder. Losing your depth perception, getting burnt so that it hurts to move you arms... It must really suck!

aww! *tearyy*

so cute! luv the drama-ish feel to it, too.

You know, I hadn't really thought of how Roy's new handicap would affect his alchemy. Then again I've only seen a few seconds of the movie but from what I did see, Roy seemed fairly proficient with it as he always was. But you raise an interesting point. Nice.

sweet.

Aw how sad/sweet idk wut to say really i would like to say update soon

aww.

that is so cute! _

Wow, that was good. I don't know if you intended for that to be a one-shot or if you were going to update it, I hope you do make it into a full fic, it would be good

Wow. I think I'm ACTUALLY the first to review here _

erm... anyways. It's got a brilliant storyline. I like how you made Edward kinda comforting in this one. In the ones I've read it's always the opposite way around(.