| Reviews for You Are Not Your Father |
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Setg'-in chapter 1 . 12/4/2005 hey hey hey that was totally cool, and sweet damn i sometimes wish i could play the violin...but its hard, i wouldn't mind listening to it, i wounder what snapes music sounds like, probably depressing...well see yha |
radicalanimal chapter 1 . 8/23/2005 perfect. |
Carey Miles chapter 1 . 8/18/2005 Aw! Sevvy-Harry fluff is so cute! |
Secret90 chapter 1 . 8/18/2005 That was cute, but it would have helped if you'd done it in first person so when 'he' was used you'd know who 'he' was. I really enjoyed the part where Snape thought "But, he's staring at your retreating back. I'm not retreating. Yes you are. Damnit, go away." It was very intesting to know that even snape has a little voice to bug him... it almost makes him human... ALMOST! |
Sylvia Sylverton chapter 1 . 8/17/2005 Very cute. I especially like the bits where Severus was talking back to the voices in his head. |
quixotic-hope chapter 1 . 8/16/2005 This was an okay story. I wish there had been a little more slash in it, but I still liked it. I liked how Harry listened to Sev playing the violin. I think next time you write a story you should have one of them be narrating it so you can you use the word "I" to describe one of them. A few times it was hard to tell if the "he" was referring to Harry or Severus. But overall, it was a good story. I liked the "You are not your father" bit. Katie |
Rayz chapter 1 . 8/16/2005 So cute! |
Lykaios Nyx chapter 1 . 8/16/2005 Aw...how cute! I liked it! |
nara chapter 1 . 8/16/2005 That was so sweet :*D Makes me all warm and fuzzy on the inside. |