I dunno if it is mean or what, but I really hate you for not finishing this

I want to see what happens and where you decide to take things x)

that was cute and although some parts weren't...realistic I really like Amy and I assume that Tara is with Holly or something or they aren't but they both maybe want to be. Because Holly seems interesting and Tara seems sweet. Overall I like this story because its to the point and doesn't ramble on and on.

also random that the owner of the club have no idea who Jodie and Alex are but offered them a job without any credentials or credit checks or references. also they're in high school so thats odd. But then again Alex always looked older than she is. I like the sexual tension and Marissa knowing that Alex is lying so she kisses her, very cute. so far I like it but I wish there was more dialog.

aw random. is Tara a fire starter or something, because thats odd. Also I like that Seth was considerate and that Alex is clearly protective of her friends, thats a good quality, but I have never been a fan of violence so I'm glad a fight didn't occur. Also Tara reminds me a bit of Tara from Buffy the vampire slayer. So aside from that I like the characters and I still like Alex.

I'm beginning to really like Amy. She's cute. Personally I don't like the name and the only Amy I like is Amy Adams...anyways...I like how supportive Summer is and how cute they are together. Also that Alex and Marissa are slowly starting to open up to one another. It'd be nice to know more of Alex's background and possibly have more dialog in the future though.

I like that Alex is in a band and in school. Also that she still has her "tough girl" persona even though she has a good heart. I also enjoy Sumer flirting with another girl, thats cute. Oh and Alex wrestling with her friends and being somewhat overly confident is cute/endearing. Does she have the purple streak and what grade are they in exactly?

love this story keep writing and update soon ! :D

really love the story(:

Please update soon lookin foward to reading more

aw that was some short update but I really like your story, so I hope there will be more...soon? :D

love the story! keep updating this is so great! yay for malex! ]

keep up the awesome story! thanks for writing this!

all the chapters in your story are so great. i hope you update soon

great first chapter. i can't wait to read the rest

love it so far! keep it up! pms!

That was the shortess chapter the story update soon plz