I love it! I mean, I think it's freaking terrible that Chakotay lived his life think Kathryn just left, when she died in that room. It's very well writen and gets an emotional response from the reader is what I meant. I think I shriveled up and died inside for Janeway when I read it :). Great job!

I think Chakotay would lose it if he found out Kathryn didn't abandon them and, in fact, died in prison... No, he knows her too well. She'd never do that. How terrible! So sad. IS THIS THE END? It doesn't say complete...

It breaks my heart that the
y thik she ran form them especally after how she always goes backfor her crew.

Yeesh, this one's pretty raw, but that's not to say I didn't like it. It's tough when the reader knows something the characters do not. I just wanted to scream "She was kidnapped, Chakotay, go back! *Think* - you know she would *never* leave Voyager on purpose!"

I liked it, well I hope you finish it soon.

Wow... evil enough... But very well written story. But I dont think She would just abandon her ship... but Ahh maybe she didnt... hum... really good. Makes the reader think :D

That's downright cruel! So the poor Captain was just left to die and no one ever found out what happened to her? That's cruel. Good grief! You weren't kidding when you called it dark.

Well-written...it doesn't seem to have a real ending. Maybe because I just don't like that it ended that way :)

waaa..sad. very sad. it's good but sad. it's well written but Janeway would *never* literally *never* do that.