I didn't understand at all but it was excellent nontheless.

Wow... I... loved this! Great one shot, one of the best I've read actually! Too bad I'm about 6 years too late on reviewing this...

-YoungBoch

Really good poetry fiction. I think she'd consider Shinji a friend but this is a relatively minor complaint overall. I liked it alot

[sniffle] I'm going to cry... not. Ahem. Ok, that was nice, and touching, and accurate, and all that good stuff. It was a bit of a downer, it was so accurate, but that's ok because Eva is too. Because the writing style is so impressionistic, I can't really say all that much about grammar, but of course the language itself can use polishing, and it's "dual" for two, not "duel", not in this context. All in all, I like it.

So hot, so alone, such an empty feeling that is how she feels.

I think you should expand on this.

please respond.

I definitely love this one! Very nice descriptions.

this is so damn sick! so SICK for god's sake delete it!