that is good. update soon please.

so sad yet so true

What a lovely little poem!

sweet and to the point! i usually like longer oneshots, but i still like this just because this is dark. dark and fluffy and the same time, i wonder how you managed that? very nice, though. n-n

good poem. short and sweet. i really like the last line how you lead up to it. good job.

umm...that was pretty well written. but you should back it up more. introduce the poem before you write it. tell the readers some more about whats going on.

... ... ... ... ... ... Definatly... lazy.