Usually i am more for BB/Rae fics, but this Starfire fic is really good i must say, keep it up!

Well I think the reason I wasn't so surprised by Star's actions is BECAUSE of the fact I know about the comic Star. If I didn't I probably would have freaked out more. Still it is surprising to see the toon Star act harsh. Like I said, I wasn't SO surprised, but I WAS surprised by it. Just like in this chapter I quirked and eyebrow at her cursing Cyborg. Then laughed cause...well I think it's pretty funny. But that's just me.

So having read this chapter, I'm gonna stand by my clone theory. Won't say anything else cause I don't wnat to run the risk of being a spoiler but still I'll be looking forward to any future developments.

Nice twist - i like it! I kinda like evil starfire but i hope the titans get to her before she's completly disected!

This is really getting good! You really know what your talking about! Keep it up!

Hmm, awesome. And I agree with your stance on the Teen Titans versus the Joker, too. Next chapter ahoy!

oh i liked that

keep up the good work

and the scandol .. scandols good

aw 2 bad, i finm u cud pull him off, buh anyway this will b amazin how eva u write it in my opinion, plzplz update asap, ur n amazin writer, so tha starfire in the tower is an imposter? im a lil confused by tha :)

luvz ya

Valda

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Oh that Havelock guy is smart! He knew that if he just took Starfire, the other Titans would be right on his tail, so he had a second robot with a clone inside take a different route. Clever!

Poor Star. First the psions, and now this! One of the drawbacks of being part of a super-strong alien race. Everyone wants a piece of you.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Excellent writing style you got here.

Having now read through all of your stories (roughly in order), I shall say: superb! Keep writing! You've managed, in my mind at least, to capture the essence of the show while being able to write to a slightly more adult level than they can do.

I think you've got the balance of humour, drama and action spot on. Having recently looked into the comics myself (being mainly a Marvelite until I saw the show) I would have to say that everything you've done seems well within the range of the characters. i thnik there pretty much spot on. Maybe you should try writing scripts for them!

With this story, I think you are being rather over-critical of yourself... I don't think Starfire is all that out of character. I recently bought the graphic novel of the Judas Contract (that being the orgional Terra saga), and in that, during the final fight, Starfire was quite willing to kill Slade (though she didn't). Obviously, though, you couldn't really have Starfire going frothing berserk in the cartoon (more's the pity) because it might frighten the little darlings (mutter mutter). Heck, they couldn't even call Slade Deathlocke because it had the word 'death' in it. Perhaps I'm just a cynical old git (true), but a flat ban on the word 'dead' seems kind of silly, US censor people...

I thnik you're also being rather modest about your fight sequences, which are getting better (and they weren't at all bad to start with)...chapter two was excellent! Keep up the good work.

I also like your treatment of the pairings (or lack thereof). Most of the humour fanfics are romantic pairings, and after a while, I get tired of that. Like you, I like the way the show handles it - rather more understated. (Not to say that I necessarily disagree with 'pairings', but everything should be in it's place and over-emphasising one aspect tends to distract from the overall appeal).

And if it's any consolation, over here in the UK we're even more behind than you... season 4 just started this week on Toonami...

Mad Max! THAT'S who Angery Dave was parodying! God it drove me nuts trying to figure that out! Hell I even got "Those!" being a parody of "Them!" right away but not Mad Max. Well, glad that's cleared up. As for the chapter itself, I think it was well worth the wait. School does suck doesn't it? It's kept me from working on my own fic as well. So I know how you feel.

Sorry got off track again. So Starfire being all hardcore badass. Definately NOT how I'd see the show version being but again as a mix between the animated Star and the comic Star it works very well. Hell the comic Star started a fight with Wonder Woman AND mouthed off to Superman. So again you've found a comfortable middle ground. Though I do hope you'll reveal in story the sudden change in Starfire's personality. The groundwork in her Tamaranian background is a good start but what really triggered this? I look foward to finding out.

I like it so far, just as long as you refran from makeing Starfire in to EVIL Starfire! I, also read the old comic's alot, and they are very different in the way they act, talk, dress,Inc. inc. inc. And if you don't mind me asking, where do you get your comic's from? I get mine from e-bay!

P. fight scene's were done very well! Please do more of them!

2nd P.s. Please don't make this *to* fluffie! I like to read about fighting more!...yes I know I'm a dork!

3nd P.s. Your right. Girl's ARE evil! If you heard how my friend's talk when they see a *HOT* guy...*shutter*O_O!(Not that I don't like-like guy's or anything like that!(I'm female!)

4nd P.s. Ready to kill me yet? LOL!

Loving the story so far. Something is definitely up with Starfire. Rubbing up against Robin when she usually blushes just by him smiling at her. And actually wanting to KILL someone! This is the girl who hesitated to attack one of Slade's robots and tried asking it nicely to surrender!

Hope you update soon. I really want to see where this is going.

OMG! this kicks ass! i'd luv 2 see more of the Joker, tha dud rocks my socks! plzplzplz update asap, i luv this

luvz ya

Valda

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oh i liked that

keep up the good work

Good luck with your future chapters, and your story has some great stuff!