Great story, continue with the great work

Finally finsihed the story it comes very higly rated I liked that you brought in the aspect of Harry going a bit mad because of his father and finding peace in the end. But my favourite part was the bit that the end where Peter called Elektra 'E' as a nod to McCabe...its little things like that that make a story.

Just while i'm reading chapter 9 i'd like to say AHA! I knew it would be Harry. Good job with this though like the action sequences especially with Peter and Elektra after she finds out its him.

Just by reading that this fic had Elektra in had me all excited and i've just read the first 5 chapters and its good i specially like the lack of identity for Elektra's employer, my money is on Harry also the sub-plot of the Hand...i hate those guys but all the answers finding out will have to wait for a more dayish part of the day not 1am tonight.

Another great fic, very impressed.

(in baby voice) i luz ur storie :) (story is meant to be spelled that way) !

I really liked this story, even though the pacing was a bit slow in places. Sometimes I guess it just seemed like you took a long time to say some things that were fairly obvious. If you want specifics I can go over it again and pick them out. I really like the idea of mixing Elektra and Spider-man's universes. I wish Daredevil were in it though! It would be great to bring him into the plot if you ever write a sequel. I know Dd never lives happily ever in the comics, but I really wish he and Elektra could be happy. Anyway, thanks for the story and good luck with your future writings.

i absolutley loved this story is freaking sweet at first i thought the dialoge needed spiced up but it got loads better your story was awesome

That was okay I guess, it could have been a little better :).

Nah, I'm just kidding you there.

Your story blowed, hard. It sucked. Did you happen to be running gasoline through your eyes, while reading the original comics? You made Peter Parker into a total jackass! Nothing like he was in the movies or the comics. Just a cheep imitation. And even worst, you made Elektra into a total weakling. I've been reading these comics for nearly 20 years now, and I KNOW that Elektra would NEVER become friends with the likes of Peter Parker. She would have interrogated/ held MJ as a hostage from the get-go, and forced Peter to get Spidey. Or, she would have tracked Spidey down from the start. As for your skills as a writer: You're a hack, pure and simple. As if anyone could not figure out that Harry was the one to order Elektra to kill Parker. You call that a twist? Also, Harry would have dropped Spidey dead in a heart beat, in order to please his father. Just a fat load of horse wash. I think I'll build a time machine, and stop myself from have ever taken the time to consider this garbage worth reading. You fail. :D

GREAT APPLAUSE. Finaly it's over! Bump. #$ % my shin!

It looks like the hard work and helpful reviews payed off. Great story and good luke with any other stories you can come up with.

great ending to great story

A strong, superb finish to a really great first story. Despite their formidable martial skills, Matsuo and Takashi were no match for Spider-Man and Elektra. I wonder how Roshi will deal with them. Glad to see that Harry is getting the medical treatment he so desperately needs. I do hope that he and Peter can get back to where they once were. Overall, a tremendous improvement from the first chapter. You are really shaping up into a fine writer. I hope that we will soon see more work from you. GK

I loved how you ended this, Mark. You did a fantastic job on this. This was a very unique story. I hope to see more from you sometime. Thanks for mentioning me at the end, that was sweet of you. I enjoyed helping you out, it was fun.

Wow, it's over! That was some final chapter, a lot happened in it. I am posting a chapter later today that uses a similar character to what you did here (coincidence). But first of all, what about that serum canister? Did I miss it... or will it come back to haunt Peter in a future story? Hmm.

Great job. Write many more, okay?

The Goblin's back!

Exciting chapter this is really impressive. I hope the next chapter is good to.

Also this newer Goblin would have less battle experience and combat training that the first Goblin so this would affect the newer Goblin's performense. So The Goblin would try to develop something to compensate for his current lack of experience. Like modify the glider to transform itself into a combat robot (like a spider slayer). This would even up the odds very well.(Not to mention make a very exciting fight)

(I wonder if the Hand would try to resurect the Green Goblin) (If they do there in for a shock because They may only be able to turn one personality into a drone and the Green Goblin's own personality would still be in control)

no a cliffhanger ah man great story