Reviews for Naivety Loss
Math Girl chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
Very sad and moving, but a pleasure to read in its own quiet, melancholy way. The boys were well represented, I thought, especially Scott, John and Virgil. (The touch with Virgil going on and on about the colors was particularly sweet.) Anyway, as always, good job, 'Sailing Fan'.
AngelMouse5 chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
This was a lovely, well written, beautiful story.

I think it captured the young Tracy boys so well and each of them beautifully.

This was beautiful, made me feel their pain and their sorrow. You've captured their loss of innocence beautifully.
white rose01 chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
this was fantastic, it made me cry! glad that you posted it so quickly, cant wait to read more on your other fics...
Chemical Girl chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
I was in tears reading this. Why I keep reading stories like this I'll never know. It was brilliant though, as I have come to expect from you, I liked the way you got across that they are only kids and don't completely understand. What a nasty nurse and doctor you had. Keep up the good work.
SeaCry10001 chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
QUITE sad? QUITE? you keep making me cry. luckily it just looks like im tired this morning. and it lucked like id been crying in my sleep too. weird huh? never done that before.

but VERY sad. no, no, no...more than VERY or QUITE sad. words cannot describe it...