THIS IS SO DRAMATIC!

OMG, YOU ARE SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER!

KEEP GOING!

i don't think harry should have forgiven everyone. also it said on pottermore that they don't spank peopleas punishments.

I am sorry but Harry seems to be really pathetic ,as if he cannot do one single thing and he's not the type to attack first and ask questions later. I don't think I have ever seen Harry this provoked when Malfoy taunts(and Malfoy has said much, much worse things to him) him and Snape calls him a mudblood lover and he just starts punching him. And as for James.. I have never thought of him as that rude and harsh ,I mean why would he go around calling his own son a worthless piece of dung. That seemed a little too far. I mean yeah sure he's sixteen and young and the war hasn't personally affected him yet so he may not realize how he is affecting Harry but that was harsh. And Harry becoming a werewolf was a little too sudden I mean no one gets a warning before they become a werewolf but still and all that crying I mean yeah he feels rejected and all but I think he wouldn't cry cause he has faced a lot worse. And with all that neglect the Durselys inflicted on him I think he ran out of tears a long time back. And I am sorry if this hurts your feelings, I really am. I am not trying to criticize your story just placing my honest opinion.

The incantation for the Shrinking Charm is Reducio.

Well I can say this much. I have thoroughly disliked this thing until now. Now I hate it, lol. You have portrayed Harry as incompetent and a disappointment as possible, almost relishing in torturing him. The classification shouldn’t be Angst, but horror without any other attributes, and you should write in your intro that you are using the inept Harry that gets replaced / retconned in the last few books, not the Harry that duels Voldemort, death eaters, fights a basilisk, teaches DADA and drives away over 100 dementors with one spell, something maybe only Bumblingdore might, possibly, match.

Frankly I think I’ll skip the rest of this thing. I might just glance and skim here and there at the remaining chapters to satisfy my curiosity but I think I’m done reading. Sorry.

Overall it was nice an well written. Snape was a jerk as usual. Harry was never the kind of person who would shot a spell first he had thicker skin then that because of the Dursley’s verbal abuse even with Draco he waited for him to take first shot.

Yay! I love werewolf!harrys

That's actually a really good idea, check my story out and tell me what you think of the first , if you wish

How can I read on? My baby child will be in agony! How oh how?!

I don't like older Remus in this story.

it's kind of way to emotional for my own good...

t's a bit cliche, but sometimes that's a good thing. After all, cliches are cliche for a reason. I enjoyed this story. Thank you.

I quite liked this. Well done.

Good story. Well written. But so dismal that I skipped over the last ten chapters to the end. I found no hope of satisfaction in it whatsoever.

Hooray for a sensible, non-guessable alias. I do get tired of fics with Evan Jameson, Hadrian Porter, and so on.