Great job on the story so far, please update as soon as you can thanks. :)

Ok. Chick, you gotta write more than that. Pleaseeeee? You left me on the last chapter with a cliff hanger, and I was crying. Bro, I don’t cry. You’re just so descriptive and AAAAAAAAAA! I feel bad for my children.. Especially Riku! Please don’t leave us like dis... back to the book. Ahem. I’m leaving this to my AU Riku to say. ((My AU Riku/Ri)) Why do you torture myself and Sora so much AAAA! And tbh, I can’t imagine Xaldin being a rapist... Like, I thought Vexen would be the best candidate, or Marluxia- ANYWAYS. Please write more! For me and Lily! ((Back to me UwU)) O.K., so while crying, I obviously did the best thing. Listen to Jeremy by Pearl Jam. And it got be thinking... would Ansem still technically be Xenahort? So if you added Xenahort in the story...((insert devious grin here)) w

Oh gosh my nervesssss. I actually ship Riku X Vanitas, but I’ve been binging fan fictions of Soku...Sorry Van! I actually consider Riku as my senpai too, so congrats to the author for making me let my baby boi like Sora..((and u Van, I didn’t forget lmao))

your summary is so bland for such a great story.

Hey This is Lillannea Belleau Ravenhearst, I posted before about how I wanted to a story with you about SoraXRiku. Let me know, Send me a message. :D

Hey, I was wondering, could we do a RikuXSora story together? I really liked this story. In fact, I pulled an all-nighter just to read it to the last sentence. It was really good and I felt really drawn in.

Awwwwwwwwww cx that's so cute, they finally figured it out cx

That's the most romantic story with action, sadness, scariest stuff that I've ever heard! I could read over and over until I die! You should write a sequel! Now that would be very awsome!

TY GG doods hes finally back

well honestly ur right i do hate u only for this... otherwise ur my bestie :D #JuanPabloFace

Ja Ne? Engish please

I love this chapter but hate the next one because u FUCKING made sora sad and hes so frail

this is so cute it was funny when sora said he was stopping for real this time please update soon

Plus, you described everything so well, I could see everything playing out in my head. It felt like I was watching a movie... this would make a great movie! I would definitely watch it :)

Holy-!
What... did I just read? ._.
(Kyoko [my OC] : Something awesome?)
Oh yeah! :D
I've read lots of stories, (like thousands...) but none quite as this. Which is good; originality is always a good thing!
I don't like yaoi that much, but I do have to admit it was pretty cute here :)
(Kyoko: O_o)
Don't look at me like that! ):(
Wow, I've stayed up all night reading this ._.
(Kyoko: Not that you ever sleep anyways. I swear, you're a vampire in disguise or something)
-_-
I kind of have a problem with the ending, though. It doesn't really give it that 'finished' feeling. I feel like there could be one more chapter summing it all up or something, like an epilogue saying what happened to everyone? At least it was a good ending, they're finally together and they didn't die. O_o
Overall, pretty great story. Sometimes I felt as if I was reading an actual published book.
(Kyoko: You say that a lot)
Well, Fanfiction is where all the master authours come, right?
(Kyoko: Well... yeah. Now if you'd just get around to posting your own stories-)
Not until they're finished! )-(
I don't know why, but I don't let anyone read my writing until it's completely done. And even then I always think it could be better.
I'm drunk with tiredness; I should probably go to sleep now ._.