Oh my gosh you should do another chapter. I love these types of stories but I suck at writing so I can’t write my own. If you have another story like this or are going to make one like it please tell me so I can like your story and read it right away.

Great Story. Keep you the good work! I wish that there are more of these kinds of FanFics. Please update soon!

wow! Interesting find, I love it!

heh, this was fun! Syndrome can be such an arse, lol.

Crazy good... who'd have thought they'd be such an interesting pair?

x. Ara

great start please add more soon.

That was interesting. I'd say more, but I've lost all rational thought upon realizing that I kind of like Syndrome/Violet.

Oh, I love snark! _

Very well written, very entertaining, etc. etc. Brava!

Nice. I like this story a lot.

neat story! well written...update soon!

I just adore how you kept everyone in character and it was good to see a tougher side of Violet. I adore that "I'm still geeking out about it!" quote. My favorite. Again, I adore how you kept them in character! I have gone through so many fics, but there isn't many Incredible fics, but hardly any can get pin point Syndrome's character. They usually just make him blunt but you got the whole quirky guy thing down for him. Excellent!

this is a great story! i think you should write more! deffinately more violetXsyndrome! there arent many of those fics and most of them make violet and syndrome so out of character! but i really liked ur take on it!

I liked it, but, did this chapter have point!

Man I am like endlessly jealous of her right now!

Whe! Going good so far. Nice character development with Syndrome. Maybe go into a little more detail with Mirage, she's kind of blah right now.