It's Dursley just so you know

This is awesomely amazing.

Your grammar is horrible,as is your spelling- If I wasn't using the mobile version I would report you for it is,I'm tempted to spend the half hour it takes to report fics using my 3DS to report you.

It is not peoples its PEOPLE.

People is the plural of PERSON.

I strongly suggest brushing up on your grammar and spelling [Perhaps you should read a Dictionary and a Thesaurus-that should help you a great deal when it comes to your spelling and grammar]

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Me is loving story...can i have a cookie?

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want sequeal. this starts good. want more.

its good :)

I dont mean to be rude when I don't review... Sometimes I just wait till the end to say something good, usually I just don't know what to say... But it's good so far...

Great start, it really grabs the reader, especially the last sentence.

omg i love this story so sad but brilliant aswell

I hope that the second chapter is longer. Can't wait to read the rest. Cheers!

Great chapter. This story looks very promising.

I really liked your story especially the grim

Usually I don't read short stories, but your's looked good. Despite the small spelling mistakes in the begining, I liked it. Your Kalli character is really unique and Harry's new form is great. Thanks for writing such a good read :]

I luv ur story it's very good with an awesome twist. It was so cool on how u made the grim reaper out to be! plz write a sequel! it's oh so good!