Aw this was sweet. You portrayed him well, so no worries. My favorite part is the last line. Finally, the red button has a good use ]

-AMi

Aw... I love it. Completely in character and... ah... I love it )

In some ways, that mismatched couple intrigues me more than Logan and Marie, and I find myself wondering what their story might be. Thanks for the inspiration.

this is really nice. interesting to get into logan's head. i like the people at the end. it makes me happy. the button thing's funny too. way to go!

Nice, sort of like a summary of his feelings during the movie.

lol wow that was a cute ending verry interesting.

please update please update!

aw that was sweet I liked it alot

As usual it's wonderfully written. I'm going to try to look critically at this so that I might be able to offer constructive critz as I never can seem to do that for you!

I suppose if i had to be picky-picky about this one thing would come to mind. At a few times it seemed that Wolvers was a little /too/ sentimental for his character. Though most of that was strightened out by the fact you had a little piece of Maire remain in him via the trade-off. (Works with Jean's line about Rogue taking on some of his own less flattering attitude features. Would work to say that some of her thoughts and views might influence his slightly- enough to make him seriously ponder it after?)

I really enjoyed your attempt at First Person. You did very well with it. And you KNOW I'm a sucker for writings in such styles. (Dang you!) More so, you wrote this so it worked very well as both a 'regular' fic and a songfic. Congrats on that! It's hard to do, exspecially if it's planned origanilly as one and not the other.

Another feature I liked was that it wasn't a musing on one or two instances, but a serious reflection on the timeline Marie and Wolvers shared. I personally find that difficult to spread my thoughts out to far.

"...that I wouldn't be the only one in major pain if Magneto showed up."

ROFL! That was /great!/ Possibly my favorite line. It certianlly broke in some laughter in here! But the couple was also a good way to mirror the oppisite thought trail. And it also surved as a double moral.

Congrats on a good story! ( ouch. I REALLY rambled. Sawy!)

Amazing characterization! This was a fantastic First Person POV, especially considering it was only your second attempt at one. Lovely, angsty story!

Interesting. I always am fascinated with first povs and how different people view the minds of characters. You did a good job being consistant. I liked most of the inner dialogue and it flowed well. Somethings I would disagree with but that is no biggie because the weight of the story carries through. Good on ya..

This was nicely written but five years after the movie it's time to move on to other scenerios because the 'he's left and thinking about her' storyline has been beaten to death.

Wow, what a great character study... first person is difficult to pull off, and for an extended piece like this, is quite impressive. Very, very nice.

And well done enough that even a non Rogue/Wolverine person like me read the whole thing, understood his motivation, and enjoyed it. You write well.

If you can stand a non-rogue relationship for our boy, I'd love to know what you think of my "Still Waters". Thanks - Miran