LOVE IT! I think you captured Hitsugaya's thought process well done!

My gosh! This was so good that it made me tear up! Ah, it was so beautiful! I loved it! *wipes tears away*

I read this years ago and reading it again now is like a dip into nostalgia. I love how you portrayed Hitsugaya's mindset and thoughts here. Every bit as passionate and intense as I imagine him to be.

BOOM! Haha. That last part nailed it. Oh gosh I soo love this. :")

That was really good. I liked it!

Ha, this is so ambiguous... Hey, but I like that in a fanfic! Good job! -opats on back- xD

I love how you put the last few words in italics. Very appropriate and effective.

I think my favorite part of this was the rhythm, the emphasis on the possessive terms in which Hitsugaya thinks. And those last three or four paragraphs...killed me dead. In a wonderful way. I like your Hitsugaya's thought process, and the abrupt way he makes choices. Favorited!

"...and he wasn’t willing to let her go."

...wow. That last line really hit me. It's just... such a typical, stubborn, Toushirou thing to think. You are SO awesome at writing Hitsugaya. w

sweet and cute!

I can so totally see Hinamori writing those letters to him

Hitsugaya is so possesive in this fic. It makes him even hotter. :) Keep the good work up.

I'm Squee-ing aloud.

Very well done.

I like possessive-Shirou-chibi just about as much as the next person, and you pull him off magnificently!

Bravo and kudos.

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woot! it's so hitsugaya! he's super possessive! lol. keep writing! here's a cookie for you!

love it so much. i really like your writings. more bleach fics please~!