Bittersweet and touching... I loved their dialogue at the end.

thank u i,ve been lookin 4 this story

lol. That was so cute! And so funny! I like it! Write more!

So cute! I loved the ending! So so very sweet! Favourites!

swet!

Ya know, I hope the oringinal story goes as good as this one

good story

Aw...too bad i have no clue what actually happened, as i haven't read the manga yet...(whoops...jus sorta spoiled if for myself...XDD)

anywho...awesome fic..When i saw hinamori pointing her sword at hitsu-kun, i was DEVASTATED! it's good to see them make up..

i went to your profile, and most of ur hot guyz, i think r hot too..XDD

ed, neji, eiji, fuji, hitsu, miroku, renji, gaara... It's funny, cuz my friends make fun of me cuz of my likings for perverted guyz (before i was obsessed with miroku, kakashi, mwu...) ...when I finish the SS arc, I'll read the rest of your fics!

congratulation! i really love it, and hitsuhina too,

please keep writing, i really enjoy read this

sorry, my english is maybe the worse thing on earth

Lol. Very cute.

lol that was soo cute an excellent story. i must sy i thoroughly enjoyd reading it

wow, it's very cute! they are one of my fave couples. I really don't see much wrong with your story except : (1) way too much fangirl japanese. sorry, but it's a bit rude and offensive to the japanese people. (2) explaining for people who didn't watch that far into the series. *cough* lazymira *cough* and still wanted to read your fic.

great! especially the last phrase “Just… just don’t wet the couch, okay?” that is so hitsugaya-like. cool!

KAWAI! I love it! _