beautiful! this is so beautifully written!
I like it how you use 2nd pov for Ace, it's so uniquely good. and omg the feels are crawling outta this story. nice! :D

Hot and cute

i loved it a lot

so fluffy T_T

this is fantastic, thanks for sharing!

Mm. Congratulations. I came to today for the first time in a year, on the off-chance that I might find a ZoroxLuffy fic worth reading. Now, thanks to you, my evening stretches before me, filled with obsessively trolling for some kind of AcexLuffy writing that can even vaguely come close to matching yours. Excellent pacing, and good character sympathy. The love scene at the end was lyrical and satisfying, despite its brevity. Thank you.

I must say mistykasumi, you have to be one of my most favorite authors on when it comes to AcexLuffy. I just can't get enough of your stories. I hope to see more AcexLuffy by you in the future.

Well.

I don't know what to say, really. ALthough, I will say I'm really not that big of a Luffy/Ace fan, myself. But, I thought I might give it a try, seeing as I'm still trying to figure out my fave One Piece pairing.

All the fics for all the pairings I've read so far are good, including this one. Damnit. One Piece has some really good pairings. XD

I really wish there was more Ace/Luffy fic's out there... *sigh* Oh well... I really liked this and the time gap acpect was good for a one shot that covered so many events. - Great job.

-FS

That was SO cute!

Nice.

Ep, ;-; I love how this is written, and AH it's so cute! It gave me good yummy feelings in my tummy making me sque. lol ] adds to favorites. bwhahaha! I love this story. ]

-amy.

aww _ that gave me warm fuzzies in my stomach! Very nice :D good job