| Reviews for Crimson Angel |
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  monkeygirl982 chapter 6 . 9/21/2005 hahahahahahahahah*sniff* wow thats hilarious keep writing! |
 Helden chapter 5 . 9/18/2005 lol i just love you phic its so funny. cheers, caroline butler |
| Helden chapter 4 . 9/18/2005 wow i didnt kno that cows had good gas mileage, lol great phic keep writin, wow this is funny. cheers, caroline butler |
| Helden chapter 2 . 9/18/2005 lol it is very funny |
| mrs. malfoy chapter 6 . 9/18/2005 o... cliff hanger... cool! update! |
| gerbear chapter 5 . 7/15/2005 HAHAHA! too funny! aaw, erik blushing, and tripping, and nervous...hehe |
| gerbear chapter 3 . 7/14/2005 HAHA! this chappie was so funny! can't wait for the next one...update soon! |
| AngelxofxmusicXx chapter 1 . 7/14/2005 I would love to see what happens from here! Please update soon! _~ |
| Phantomess785 chapter 3 . 7/14/2005 LOL That WAS funny! xcellent story, Rochelle! Hurry and update, I've neer read a fic quite like this one before! |
| lg chapter 1 . 7/12/2005 nice story, it's paced well, and you can feel the bloody girl's desperation. I really like it, please continue. :) coupla nitpicks: however, you used the word 'sear'/'searing' too often, too close together - it's ok to use them more than once, but more than once in the space of a coupla sentences is too often. why should a fistful of dirt make a man scream in pain? he would be more likely to blindly curse in French. Why is there a dumpster in Paris at this time? I think you need to more explicitly hint at when the story is occuring. "as you already know" is jarring, and re-reading the chapter, there was no hint that the bloody girl was not a native of Paris. |
