I really expected Jan to be spanked. Too bad.

Um, her punishment wasn't nearly severe enough.

don't think they would say gansta, i think they woud say hoodlum clothes. bradys were old school like that
like what you got, cant wait to keep reading

I laughed at this... And I say there wondering what you're thinking... And how you live...

Okay, that's mean. But this is so far out and so weird I just don't even know...

Yes, because the Bradys would just ground Jan it she burned down their house. How realistic. Not.

What on earth...? Um, I think the Bradys know that Jan exists. And Marcia wouldn't punch Jan in the arm. Is this a serious fic?

What the hell is this?

I like it. Evili Jan rules.

well I think this is really funny

it parodies the bradys really well esp ignoring jan

hilarious how all that happens is Jan gets grounded, in the show that seems to be the punishment for everything!

Um... the Bradys would NEVER forget one of their children like that, a gang of men would NOT let a little rob a liquor store with them, and if a girl started smoking, got a tattoo, tried to shoot up the school, and burned down the house, there is NO way that her punishment would be getting grounded for 6 monthes! I don't know if your story was supposed to be this way, but it was not believeable in any way, no offense...

You mentioned that you based this on the show. It doesn't seem like you have seen the show at all! The Bradys NEVER act like that. Yes, they have alot of children, but they count them as they come down the stairs. They all are very aware of the fact that they have a daughter and sibling, Jan. The actual writing of it was fine, and I can even understand how Jan would feel like that, being the middle child and all. But as soon as she doesn't come down to supper, the family would have noticed right away and gone up to see what was wrong. That is how the Bradys are. Your story is nothing like the true Bradys, and I would never enjoy reading something as twisted as this.

Back in the day, they did sell cigarettes to minors.

This is awful. It is completely unrealistic and would never happen. The joke about not knowing Jan's name got old before it began. I am not finishing.

TOTAL CRAP!

The Bradys would NEVER do that!

Really good!