Oo, very intriguing. Interesting spin on things, a nice little 'what if.'

I kinda wanna know what would happen next. o.o

Well, this is a very good piece and definitely deserves more affection, even if it is a couple years old:

It feels like a completely plausible scenario for the two Yugis - it reads like 'Yami' has fallen into depression, and Yugi's not, and the way they interact because of that feels very realistic. That Yugi has no idea what to do, that sometimes Yami is "normal," the awkward distance growing between them - it rings true.

(favorite!)

I love this, it's an awesome one shot

hi! i dont really get what the story is about, (im think that way soz) could u explain? i think its well writen, well done! -

It's very... interesting. Not the usual type of thing that you write, but hey, it's nice to see something different every once in a while. _

Anyway, it was a good fic, and as a One-Shot, really not that bad. But there were a few problems...

You should always include a disclaimer. _ Rule of not mine!

[He pulled open the fridge door] It sounds a bit weird to me... 'He pulled the fridge door open' seems better.

[had gotten red marks on quite a few of the last tests. (Thankfully the catch-up tests were easier)]

This could be better if it was 'had gotten red marks on quite a few of the last tests (thankfully the catch-up tests were easier)]', as the words in the brackets cannot form a seperate clause by themselves.

[duelling] Generally, this type of 'duel' is spelt with one 'l'.

[Would-

Stop it!]

Shouldn't this be:

Would - (with one space for the punctuation)

- Stop it! (as Yugi is interrupting Yami?)

[apologize] This isn't a mistake but a query - why are you using American spellings?

[picked up the bread knife...avoid being deeply cut] How can Yugi cut himself deeply with a bread knife? Isn't that the point of a bread knife, that it doesn't harm the person who's using it?

Well, anyway, that's my Review! As I said, this was an interesting fic (damn that Joey!) and it was different to your usual writing style, but you pulled it off quite well. _ Cool.

See you!

~Kitana~

There's some aspect to this that really wants me to read it again and again. Not really sure if its the rather unique take on Yami's position or your nice execution. Very enjoyable none the less. Please keep writing.

I like it can you continue it?

Fabulous! Absolutely wonderful! Very thought-provoking. What would Yami be like if he couldn't pass on? I think you hit the nail on the head. He is the type to brood. Excellent depiction!

~Una