even though I'm not much a romance craze but this chapter is so touching it brought the warm feeling within me when i read this. :)

OMG! no Squall please don't die! you're the hottest male in the Final Fantasy series you can't die like this! tears aside literately, very awesome story.

wow! that was an absolutely sweet ending. i literally cried when i read this chapter.

Hm... the plot development wasn't too bad. This story isn't the best I've read, but it isn't too bad either. ) On overall, despite some rather odd parts, this story was quite enjoyable to read.

Also, I do believe that you carried across that poignance quite well in the epilogue. ;)

I like the story very much, but i wish that it would have anothere ending. You should do an alternet ending for those who did not like the original one. Well a litle recomendation, you hande a few spellig problems but that ok. Still love the story and i wish that you continue your writing and if you can, make them all about vampires.

nice story i enjoy it

That was a bittersweet ending...

Like a double edged blade, cutting both enemy and yourself.

Well...It was left open for a sequel...but I highly doubt that will come.

I had fun reading this.

NO! how can he die! ack! well gotta hand it to you, that was a great story. as all of yours are. liked the whole vampire/final fantasy concept. keep writing! you have a true talent! Matt

Great story

Well, this was a cool story, yet sad at times. You managed to make it full of twists too, very clever.. but what the hell? He's dead but his heart still beats? So is he alive or not? Oh well, nice job.

AW! That was so sad. It was an excellent fic I loved every minute of reading it. BRAVO!

What was so sad T_T but i loved it! You did a very good job! I love this story!

OMG THE FANFIC ENDED *cries* but great ending for a great story . well theres not much to say but great story Casi Muerto . *audience applauds* *cheering to be heard in the background* see they love your story . well hope you write more stories .

Much luck in writing,

Angel Wing Rinoa7

T-T *cries like a baby* That sucks...sort of...still... *wah*

YOU MESSED ME UP! YOU MESSED SEPHI UP! BAD BAD GIRL! Hahahaa. I kid. I did not really like the fact that everyone died, because I got so into their characters. But no! You just had to do it, didn't you. T_T You got that from me... Damn...I should stop influencing you. *sigh* Anyways, you forced me to read and I got addicted. YA HAPPY NOW! Freaking weirdo. Haha. Ok, I'm done. It was good though, don't worry. Some parts seemed rushed though. And it was a bit too...short...for me. L_L