Let...let me take a moment...to appreciate this *swallows* beautiful...I'm just gonna say this...I'm not ashamed that I cried reading this...nope

wow. I have no words

Aw, poor traumatized children! Good story!

Such a sad story- poor Gaara. Very well written though, definitely gave me chills

Absolutely amazing. Brilliant well thought out. Good job. Nothing like siblings live and loyalty. Natural nurturer remark is.

theres so confused it would take a lot to make them understand but temari always showed that she care for him.

Very nice! Too bad this didn't appear in the manga at all. Woulda been nice to see. :D

POOO YOU YAHAMARUUUUU

amazing, seriously

naw sand sibling sweetness and cuteness and and and nawwwwness

I find this Gaara to be absolutely adorable. Is that bad? I think that all he needed was someone who loved him and these kinds of things that people write about is what I think should have happened. I mean for goodness sakes, he can't help the fact that they put the monster inside of him! Your story was most welcomed and I thank you for writing such a gloriously jazzy story. I had a wonderful time reading it. .

A sweet story, despite the encroaching darknes and gore.
And i guess things have gone full-circle :) Yashamaru has been revealed to be a good guy, and Gaara is no longer a psycho, and i can see this story fitting into canon now :)
Hope to see more from you!

This was beautiful. And so sad. I'm falling in love with these kids.

Oh my God it was the best fanfic I've ever read in my whole life!

I loved this! :)
It's so realistic and I can totally see it happening in the anime/manga! And I really liked the line "Yashamaru says" at the end.