D'awwwww too cute I love this story. Fantastic job :)

Aw - so sweet! Good for Doris. Nicely written, I enjoyed this fic.

I read this story today and I really loved it :) I think it was really sweet and written really nicely. :D I really hope you will do another Charming/Doris fic someday!

~* Leni

...O.O..*Falls out of my chair,gasping*oh my god!he KISSED HER!...AW!-how cuutee!charming likes doris now,yay!hee hee!good chappie.

AW! *big hearts in eyes* That's so cute, and sweet, for that matter! You're a fun writer, you know that? It's always refreshing to read fics where you've got a mix of everything in the story. Also...the references to other stories are fun, even if you don't know every one of them...(which is weird, because I do know them...and love the fact that you put the Katschei in different places _)

Laters,

KD

Yay! It's done. It could've been a little more...I dont know...dramatically romantic? But good either way. Perhaps an alternate ending would be nice.

*squeals and claps!* Yay! This is so exciting!

Erm, one tiny nitpick, though. Her eyes are definately green, not brown.

Still. Yay!

oh...poor doris..all insulted again!..now that i've read the entire chronicals of narnia,i get alot of this stuff now,heh..wasnt the tarkeena from that book,"the horse and his boy"?that tarkeena?anyway,update soon!

Aww...glad to see another great chapter! The only concrit I have is that it seems as though Charming goes from insulting Doris to asking her to the ball rather abruptly. Might be nice to see a little bit more of an internal struggle there. Other than that, great!

It took you long enough...satisfying, but you need to update more regularly, or you're going to lose your reviewers

*The Blimp Alchemist* I changed my name back ;

Anyways! Wow! It updated! And no worries about the late updating. Life attacks, right?

But to the story, oh Charming. You're falling for Doris and you don't even know it :3

oh...what'll happen...?UPDATE SOON,PLLEEASE!

Dun dun DUN! The plot thickens. ...again, hehe. Nice to see them make it to Narnia...very good chapter.

*sigh* Charming Charming Charming... I know all will work out in the end :D

And it's good to see you're okay, with effing Wilma and all ;

Moving the story along nicely! I'm curious to see what happens with Charming and Laslareen. It's kind of funny to me that everyone is giving Doris advice on how to win Charming even though they all think Charming is a total "scoundrel". I'd think they'd be telling her he's no good and she should find someone better. But I like him, so I'm still rooting for them to get together in the end.