It's a shame that you didn't finish this story. It took an interesting turn in the end of this chapter. Hope that you will write more someday.

Too bad you dropped this story, it's an excellent piece of writing.

Oh please tell me that you have more. Really, this story is amazing, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Everyone was great and in character, and just...great. I disagree with some of the other reviewers who said that you were being redundant, I don't think so at all. Please, please continue.

Very nice. Good protest of the Patriot Act, and extrodinarily good use of it as a conspiricy theory.

You tend to get a little redundant regarding Byers' marriage. Try to watch the number of times you mention it.

Other than that, however, a very well written piece.

Another excellent chapter. I loved the begining...maybe its becasue it had Jimmy in it. Ok. I admit it, it had Jimmy in it...AND you gave him depth. Very few fic writers do...they just use him to make dumb remarks.

Anyway...I love this chapter. and I need to inform the LGM list I'm on. Super fic. excellent portrayel of the guys...no mary Sue in sight.

Amy

Aewome second chapter. Sorry it took so long to review...I was waiting for you to post another chapter before I did...but...

I know your still writing this fic becasue I've popped over to your LJ and seen snippets from future chapters. All I can saw is...WOW! I can't wait to read the full chapters and in context.

I love Yves' portrayel here. Very real. Your doing an excellent job!

Amy

Hi, Amy. I'm not sure if this is the best way to respond to a review, but here goes. _

I'm definitely still planning on updating this. I'm finishing up the next chapter as we speak, but I don't have a firm ETA on posting it yet. In the meantime, I tend to post updates and upcoming fics/scenes on my LiveJournal if you're interested. I have some snips and brainstorms from upcoming scenes in this fic posted now:

Hey there. Sorry if I'm being pushy but do you plan to continue this story? I hope so.

Amy (who is waiting a little to impatiently for an update)

*sob* such a good piece! I loved this!

Hi Viola,

This first chapter/prologue is really well written. The summery sounds intriguing and am looking foreward to reading more.

Good job

Amy