Great story.

We're getting Paid overtime for this,right? I can't believe you got us to work here! Oh well,we had a good begging for mercy and we MIGHT NOT PWN ,here's what you need to do for stuff...
Quick death Automatic
Long,suffering Death 50 Pokos
Join Titan Dweevil and Louie 1,000 Pokos
Join Antenna beetle and Doodlebug 5,000 Pokos
Finish Super Metroid perfectly 250,000 Pokos
Free Life 3,000,000 Pokos
K,Bye
P.S. Waterwraith hates you.

Fool,I was the one who killed them...This whole thing was a joke.I hope to see you in heck,a.k.a Paris!
I go with MAL when he's in cellular ,Here's a Chart of what is honest.
Raging Long-Legs - NOT GUILTY
Segmented Crawbster - NOT GUILTY
MAL - GUILTY - Stopped at nothing to destroy everything
? - GUILTY - The guy who's behind all this
-Beady Long- I MEAN ?

I,the great mighty Titan Dweevil,think that this was the worst had a happy ending,no shiny things,a section in which I get PWNed,And there was nothing about all my weapons destroying MAL and getting back to the better HOPE you don't mess up with any more chapters :(
-Master of all that's shiny,Lord Titan Dweevil
P.S: My Weaponz PWN j00!

I love how Chapters 9-10 were about them inside me.I feel special.I bet you feel weird seeing that all the bosses in your stories are giving you feedback,but we on.
*In my Mind*
Anger: I acted like a wuss at the end...What's wrong with ya!?
Love: *Is extinct*
Survival: I like trains.
Sanity: I might have to open...THE DOOR *Points to a door that says "Open for insanity" on it*
*Back in world*
So...Yeah.
-Giant Breadbug,Anger,Love,Survival,Sanity,insanity

Now,this is something even I wouldn't do! I WOULD AT LEAST FART AFTER PULLING THE LEVER!
Also,Check out these new farts :D
Franklin B Fart - Reflects projectiles(Ready for use)
Random inside Joke Fart - Makes a random inside joke come in(Ready for use)
Nuke fart - OH GOD IT WILL KILL US ALL! (Only use when everything isn't worth doing anymore)

-Doodlebug
P.S. Segmented Crawbster told me he wants to be able to stop snuggling people.

I knew it! Worst Chapter! TOLD YOU I'D GIVE YOU FEEDBACK! *Holds up Picket sign* No more grime! Make a chapter that's prime! The concept of these is getting crazy! I liked the bosses,so please go back to chapters with them a 14,15,and 16 chapter about them(I might overlike them,but that's because I am one) Also,Replace Velociraptors with,I dunno,A reference to an earlier chapter: Mr. game and watch!
-Segmented Crawbster
P.S. Titan dweevil says to stop making him say "My weapons Pwn j00!"

Why does Titan kill himself? Why can't he Live?!:(

This story had me laughing 'til I cried so many times that it's funny! This is also one of the stories that motivated me, a random stranger to you, to create a fanfiction account. Hope your other story is just as awesome!

This is the epicest thing I have ever read!
Will you write all of these and act them out
with figurines? I would love to see that!

This was randomly hilarious. You made me look at the bosses at a whole different way. I am not even done with the game yet! I've just passed the Ranging Bloyster. (And I do know the trick, BTW.) Awesome job on this!

Wow. I didn't say any of my favorites. My bad.

Favorite characters: Giant Breadbug, MAL, Doodlebug, and Waterwuss (he seems scarier in the game.)

Favorite lines: "To the fortress of farts, away!" veloceraptors *are extinct* *in tux* Boulder *in tux* "Glint always shouts what he is going to do."

Favorite scene: The wedding.

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WAHAHAHAHAHA! That is the funniest thing ever!

Woah, I remember this from the Pikmin 2 board on NSider! :) I haven't seen this for YEARS.

It's written in script style, but still, it has potential.

It was funny. My favorite character most likely was Giant Breadbug. I would like to see a version from Doddlebug.