Finally catching up on all the things I should've been reviewing this summer but didn't. And the first thing I have to say is... I dunno. Don't know where to start. But this is one heckuva one-shot. Very nice, and I am muchos impressed. And I can't help but think that Stormcloud and Seek would make great friends, if Stormcloud was ever given a reason to dislike Diddly... (Of course, does he need one?)

~ckret2

Nice how you start off(sorta) with making us vaguely sympathetic to Doublebit. Then you make sure we don't like him anymore.

And Stormcloud was just plain creepy. Poor guy. I like this, as creepy/depressing as it is.

Shylock ref! *bounces off the walls*

*calms down to read; winces* Poor Stormcloud. (...Okay, poor Doublebit too. But mostly poor Stormcloud.) Unusually... and refreshingly violent for a Minicon. Like his pov in the beginning. Very creepy.

-“Substandard materials, it seems.”-

*giggles nervously* Nice line. *backs away from Stormcloud*

-Abrown and purple Minicon-

Should be a gap there. Otherwise, no crits. Love the last lines. *nodnods*

Shylock ref! *bounces off the walls*

*calms down to read; winces* Poor Stormcloud. (...Okay, poor Doublebit too. But mostly poor Stormcloud.) Unusually... and refreshingly violent for a Minicon. Like his pov in the beginning. Very creepy.

-“Substandard materials, it seems.”-

*giggles nervously* Nice line. *backs away from Stormcloud*

-Abrown and purple Minicon-

Should be a gap there. Otherwise, no crits. Love the last lines. *nodnods*

Shylock ref! *bounces off the walls*

*calms down to read; winces* Poor Stormcloud. (...Okay, poor Doublebit too. But mostly poor Stormcloud.) Unusually... and refreshingly violent for a Minicon. Like his pov in the beginning. Very creepy.

-“Substandard materials, it seems.”-

*giggles nervously* Nice line. *backs away from Stormcloud*

-Abrown and purple Minicon-

Should be a gap there. Otherwise, no crits. Love the last lines. *nodnods*

Definitely a good one-shot.