| Reviews for House Call |
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AnonymousNavi chapter 4 . 6/4 ALFREEEEEDD. GOOD DAD ALFRED. I CAN'T HANDLE HIM. SO PRECIOUS. He was so good to Richie ;o; our boy needs it. I'm so happy. Ahhh, I feel so bad for Maggie ;; And I'm scared about the stress Richie is going to have to go through when he goes home. Loved Robin, he was such a fun presence to have. I feel like he brings life to the bat cave. I loved how unpleasant the fly to Gotham was? It felt so much more real that way. MORE OF VIRGIL AND RICHIE CARING ABOUT EACH OTHER SO MUCH. How Virgil just kept saying, "I want you back," just DESTROYED me. I was so distraught over the idea of Virgil just so terrified at Richie being clocked into the computer for so long. Speaking of which, Richie's interfacing was really cool. OH SHIT SUPERMAN SAID A SWEAR. HE'S PISSED. Honesty, I'm glad Superman was the end of the chapter twist. I was SO SCARED the entire time, thinking Braniac was going to resurface and take over Richie again. And we have reached the end... *clenches heart* Augh, I knew it was coming, but it was no less painful. What a beautiful fic you have here. Thank you so much for writing it. I'm so happy Static Shock inspired you to do so. I hope wherever you are now, you're doing well. Maybe you're still writing fanfic (here or on ao3, idk, I haven't checked yet) or maybe you've moved on to other things, but whatever you're doing now, I hope you're happy and fufilled. While it lasted, this fic brought me so much joy. Thank you again for writing it. |
AnonymousNavi chapter 3 . 6/4 Virgil massaging Richie's neck where it was hurting him ;o; The two of them sharing comfortably sharing a bed during sleepovers, Virgil counting on Richie to have his back, even when Richie's not in costume. Richie thinking about how special Virgil is to him while he was brushing his teeth? ;O; aahhhhhh I can't handle these too, they're too amazing. They care about each other SO MUCH. It makes my heart just want to burst with happiness. (I am *big eyes emoji* at that "I'll keep him occupied" exchange with Adam. *whispers* vr? maybe?) Also, I am so happy Adam decided to help then out :'D I just wanted to cry ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPTER. BROS COMFORTING WACH OTHER. HELL YEAH THAT IS SOME TASTY HURT COMFORT. |
AnonymousNavi chapter 2 . 6/4 *POUNDS FISTS ON TABLE* WHAT A GOOD CHAPTER. I WANT TO SCREAM. Dude like, what the fuck, this is so good. Martian Manhunter being cute as fuck, the casual chatting at dinner with everyone felt so real and good and heart warming, and I wanted to CRY when Mr. H called Richie family. And when Richie said that was his home? Um, strike me down where I stand? How dare? My heart? Just everything about this is so amazing. Virgil and Richie and so supportive and sweet to each other? It destroys me. They're so comfortable with each other and Virgil turning down a Justice League offer FOR RICHIE, just- just- UGH. I love how you're touching on the implied technopathy that Gear seemed to have in the show, at least with backpack/his own gadgets. I sat up and yelled, "No!" out loud when I read that the gas station was burning. |
AnonymousNavi chapter 1 . 6/4 THIS WAS SO GOOD! I enjoyed every moment of it. I love your writing style and how your dialogue. Everyone felt so alive and well rounded. Richie tracking his mutation and the conspiracy with it was so cool. I was captivated. |
Guest chapter 4 . 9/29/2016 You ever going to update this? Cuz it good |
Shadow-wolf78 chapter 4 . 6/18/2016 Loved the story so far I do hope you plan to continue it. It is really amazing and well done. Very interesting as well I really do hope you update again. |
Ivy Adrena chapter 1 . 8/17/2015 *chinhands* Pretty please tell me you're going to finish? The cliffhanger is killing me! |
Solar Flare013 chapter 4 . 3/5/2015 So... any chance of chapter five? (Ssshh I'm not delusional) |
demonwolfkid chapter 4 . 11/26/2014 A short delay? Try years. Not that I have any room to judge, or that I'm particularly complaining. You gave me a good read, and I knew from the start the chances of you coming back to this were mute. That being said, I love this story. Richie character has been developed here in a complete, complex character, which I appreciate just as much as the superb story |
SapphireSecret chapter 4 . 10/9/2013 This story is amazing! The characterizations and dialogue are excellent, the plot riveting, and I love Richie's POV. This seems to be leaning towards VxR, which I'm not a huge fan of, but everyone is so in-character that I can love this story anyway. This is when I would say I can't WAIT for the next update, but unfortunately, I see you haven't done that in, like, eight years, and such an occurrence seems rather unlikely. But if you felt like picking this story up again, or if you have an unpublished chapter or two (or even a planned sequence of events for your fanfiction) lying around you feel like posting, or even if someone else picked the story up where you left off (though I'm sure it wouldn't be nearly as good) that you could direct me to, that would be AWESOME. But seriously. House Call is too good a story to leave hanging like this. (And, also, I really want to know what happens next... The suspense is killing me.) |
Mitsuki Shigamatsu chapter 4 . 9/11/2013 Gah, busted! Time for Gear to come clean to Superman about how much of Brainiac's remnants he makes use of... As well as the fact that Gear has a copy of Brainiac's memories stuck in his head... |
Handmaiden of Awesomeness chapter 4 . 2/10/2013 Oh. Man. 8 years. 8 flipping years since it was updated. I think my brain just exploded. Why did this story have to be so Amazing! I think I'm gonna cry. But the sad part is this story will probably sit hear forever on a cliffhanger like THAT! T_T I will hope fervently one day that you will get back on to entertain us lowly readers again! |
Funbaby911 chapter 4 . 11/1/2012 This is a great story but you need to update soon. You left it at a cliff hanger and I am dying to see what happens. |
disapointed chapter 4 . 5/9/2012 Awe damn... you're not gonna update are you? It's a pity. I really liked this one. |
hmm chapter 3 . 5/9/2012 I didn't think it was 3 weeks. But I may have missed something. |