I'm not sure how Jake would have taken it either, but I imagine him sobbing and sobbing until he passes out from grief and guilt from not taking Peyton with him as I think, if I remember right, she offered to leave Tree Hill with him, but he didn't want to wreck her life. Poor guy, and I really don't think Brooke would truly ever get over it completely. Their relationship was love at it's simplest and I think that's why it was so great to watch that friendship on screen. Damn, this is so incredibly sad and so well written.

I really cried, I tried not to, but I really did. In the series, I'm surprised she even survived all that crap that happened in that season, and she really did weather a lot of it in loner fashion. I always thought there should have been more fallout from the crushing loneliness.

wow i have read your stories and this one hit me. i hope to be able to read the end. i know you have not updated it in a long time but thank you for writing so openly on this subject. it helped me realize that i should think before i take on this action myself.

hey

Wow. This is amazing. I think this is the best story I have ever read on FanFiction, and believe me, I've read a lot. It is emotional and honest and well, I can't describe what else it is in words. Not to many thing make me cry, or even tear up, but this did. I actually felt like I was there, living in the moment. This story is great. Thanks for writing this, even though I know how hard it must be for you.

Update if you can. Thanks again,

Lucas Scott 22 3

omg omg omg...

youve wrote this so well. please dont give up on this story~

update soon.

LIZ

It's weird... I just added your story to my favorites, even though I only read the first chapter and just passed my eyes through the other ones, cause I can't bring myself to read them. I'm not even sure if I'll ever have the courage to read them, but it'll stay on my favorites either way. A little weird, huh? I like the way you're writing it, at least what I've read, and I think it's pretty real. I've got a story about Peyton too, in which she tries to kill herself, only I can't bring myself to actually write a scene like that. And I get what you said, it takes a lot to write a chapter for a story like that. I just wanted to say it's a great story, and I hope you'll UD soon. I'd like to see Brooke and Haley talking more, though. Anyway, it's great.

i read this, printed it, and gave it to my friend. she was thinking stupid stuff, and well oddly enough your story helped her. she's now in the hospital being looked after, so shes alright. your story was good, it helped her a lot. more than i could. thanks

You did awesome on the reactions of the characters...My family and I went through something like that. My cousin and my friend collieded head on in a snowmobiel accident in February. My cousin died at 20..and my friend ended up with a major concusion. But any way...a way from My own personal sob story...you're doing a great job to me...and it doesn't seem dark at all to me...it seems real...

Keep up the good writing!

please please please please UPDATE THIS (pr tlel us if ypu've abandoned it).

you couldn't have written this any better. you handeled this so well-so delicate, so beautiful it made me cry.. and i believed every second of it.

nice job.

this was so sad

please update soon

I think you have a very well-thought out story. It's extrememly sad and has had a huge impact on me. Though I have never lost anyone to suicide, it's very sad. I have had friends lose friends to suicide and it has a huge impact on them. I think you're doing a pretty good job, but my only thing is that i think the story is moving a bit too quickly. But that's ok. It's still good, but its ok to take your time and thoroughly explain things. Wonderful job, though!

~Volleybalover

oh my god i love your story. i started crying while i read it.

Oh my God...I so cried when I read this...It's so sad, and the way you describe it is so...real...I can't believe I just cried...

I did know someone who commited suicide...it wasn't my best friend, but a friend none the less, and I think you describe very well how it feels to lose someone like that. The "Why" is definitely the most important part after someone does that...the "if"'s come later..."what if I had asked her how she was doing", "what if I had talked to her earlier", "what if..." But it's all too late, you know?

I admire your work. Writers who can make me cry (and laugh) are the best ones. You made my cry, and in other stories you have made me laugh several times, so...you're really good ;P