If she had less diginity i bet she'd have jumped for joy!

I love this fanfic! It's great to read a fanfic about Edna's thoughts on the whole superhero ban, because as what was said in the movie and in this fic, the supers are not the only ones who missed the glory days. Haha I loved the way you described Edna's viewpoint on making costumes for supermodels, you're right when you said that the trendy things in fashion look very uncomfortable :D I also liked how you ended it, with Edna thinking that she better retire, but there goes Mr. Incredible's phone call. It's as if Bob reliving the glory days had opened up hope and a new beginning for others as well :)

Top of the line!

Brilliance, that ending XD Very insightful to Edna's thoughts and memories of the old times, and the little bit where she remembers things from the heroes she designed for was good, too. Love it!
DAHLING.

A brilliant piece on Edna's longing for the glory days. The part where she remembers how each super preferred their tea I found heartbreaking for some reason. But the very end - "DAHLING!" - had me grinning.

Well done!

Good story, very good, not too short and not too long. The best place is Edna's last word when bob says that it is Mr. Incredible. It is clear that you put it into the film itself. Well done.

Dear Ms. Kinnikufan:

Not bad. Maybe you could do a follow-up story about Bomb Voyage...

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

I totally LOVE your take on the fashion modeling industry! Too perfect! And I agree 100%. They are TRAGICALLY awful role models for women/girls today.

A super story ,Dahling, simply stunning. (Heh heh... I love calling people Dahling!)

FinallY! An E story. She's my fave for some strange reason, but so is Brad bird. Although, "I never look back Dahling, it distracts from the 'now'." ;)

This is really great writing! Not only because I can't find a single punctuation or grammer mess up anywhere, but it's... I dunno what you'd call it, artsy? Very well done!

Great story! That was very touching.

It was great to see Edna's feelings.

Bob was not the only one missing the glory days

They share that point in commun.

Keep on the good work!

This might be your best yet!

wow, that was cool. very descriptive. Great job!

Quite absorbing, dahling. I've never delved very far into the world of tea, but I know that certain flavors carry distinctive memories, so it makes sense that she remembers best the people she cared enough about to serve tea to. Aside from some minor mechanical errors, this is excellently done.