ROFL! Man this brought me back to all the terrible YYH fic's of the early 2000s. I loved this, Hiei's portrayal here had me cackling like a crazy person! Thanks for your hard work!

This is one of the most fitting criticisms of fanfic culture. EVER.

The like would probably be 'maybe they were onto something with the Fruits Basket idea'. Fushigi Yuugi is pretty big ass too so...eh. i wanna remove Kuwabara too. Its not fair how he does important things randomly. You could make another OC or include Keiko or something...

In simple terms, IT'S AWESOME, FUNNY AND SOOOO PRACTICAL X''D

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Oh My Merlin! I love this ! No seriously everyone needs to read this. This here is bloody brilliant! Yes! Stick it to those thoughtless writers who think just writing about characters with no inclinations of their personalities, characteristics, or thoughts and just stringing things together is okay. Well its not! Sorry rant over. By the way Plot Holes was absolutely hilarious :)

That was beautiful. So beautiful. Also painfully accurate. Thank you for being amazing :)

"He's too busy studying. Schedule full right up."

haha I loved this .

...Kuwabara is amazing. He was my favorite character up until the Dark Tournament arc-he's still in my top four. Way to take the Yu Yu universe to town with this funny satire.

Pfft. Cute. I agree, If you're going to write a story at least attempt to write the characters correctly. Even if you don't like them or don't quite know how to write them. The more you try the more likely you are to figure it out. Not that I can talk I have a lot of trouble with characterization. But anyway cute story. It was really funny. Not that you're likely to read this review considering this is one of your older works and in not even entirely sure if you still frequent this site. Doesn't matter, reviewing is common courtesy. Peace!

THIS! This or one similar should be the first fic listed in every fandom and should be manditory reading for new writers (and some of the vets). Thank you!

Funny and well-written. I like how even though you're defending Kuwabara you don't sacrifice Hiei's dislike for him.

Oh, look out, Kyo and oh my gosh, dear Yuki! Haha!

Haha! Nice mention of the dub; I loved it to bits, but keeping Koenma's presented version of the speech here in that English adaptation, I think, would have been a pretty great enough idea...

Awesome, funny, witty, and so very true fic! Nice job!

I'll say this: I agree. Period. About everything. Good fic-writing (and I mean really good and true-to-the-characters-and-the-show's-plot fic writing), the whole excluding-Kuwabara thing (seriously, those people need enlightenment, badly), plotholes... everything! Funny, and so, so true. Awesome one here! And... I say to Kyo and Yuki... good luck, good, hard, never-ending luck. You'll need it, I think... :)