Qutie interesting,kinda sad its not completed.

Another amazing story that has been abandoned. I loved how you took your time in developing a relationship between Faith and Xander. After everything the two have been through and their past with one another, it was certainly believable.

Having Angel reborn and joining the Cleveland gang was also a nice touch. Between him, Connor and the Slayers that are already there, makes them a team that's really tough to beat.

Overall this story was without a doubt a blast to read, and my only complaint is that it hasn't been updated in so long. After almost a decade of nothing, I know we won't suddenly get new chapters for this fic, but the optimist in me still hopes that one day your muse will come back to for this story. Till then...thanks for giving us what you have already written and Great Job.

Why are all the good stories unfinished and abandoned?

Okay, I know that it's been years since this story has been updated but I figured that I'd put in my thoughts of it. The story itself is good. There are a few mistakes here and there, but nothing major enough to count against it. I like the Xander and Faith interaction, though I think that Xander would not be as scared of Faith. He would be wary around her, but not scared.

The only thing that really bothered me about the story is how Xander is portrayed in the story. Someone who has been fighting for as long as he has and lived would have developed some skills that would compensate for those he lacks.

Hope you decide to write more one day.

Another really good X/F story. Deserves to be finished.

Thanks for sharing Richard3116

Nice fanfic.

I really like the Faith/Xander.

Is there some chapter in progress ?

I..can't belive it! When the story hits the apex of it's awesomeness, you leave it hanging? You merciless evil person. Stop the torture and tell us what happens next. On my knees begging here!

these story so far is wicked awesome! please tell me theres another chapter coming up soon!

I'm wondering what Xander has to talk to Faith about!...something bout love spells...eek did he put one on her? i'm in suspense here lol!

well great job and please update very soon!

Wonderful story; too bad it seems you have abandoned it, or is there a chance that we might see an update? Seeing that you have lots of episodic sub-plots beside the main plot, I think it shouldn't be too difficult to come up with new chapters.

Anyway, I like how you've managed to combine many "old" characters from the shows with new ones of your own making. I always dig a good Xander/Faith story, so this one's really got me hooked.

good so far

Baby-boo? Baby-boo? *snurt* Faith's head would explode if she caught herself saying that. *snort* More, please!

Love this fic, Keith. Very nice group dynamics and setup. Great and suprising characterization of Andrew. Love Breen. Irish women are always filled with energy and irony :)

I also liked the way you have handled W&H and have brought back Angel still being a vampire with a soul.

Faith, of course, is always hot and Xander funny. You deal their issues well, but of course this was expected from a Xander/Faith shipper veteran ;)

I thought you had dealt the Wood thing well in chapter one in a nice clean and short way. I thought it would have been better to keep it that way. But, it was good to see Wood getting what he deserves anyway ;)

All in all a good read so far and hope you'll continue it fast!

Oh, laughed hard about the Doctor and Nurses that Xander played with Ms Rosenburg in his childhood joke. Good one!

Crappola! That blasted lawyer again?

Oh Andrew is in so much trouble! And Xander is gonna stand up for him because he's been that stupid before too. That's rich! LOL

More please?

Utterly wonderful few chapters. Waiting eagerly for more!

Okay, way to go Andrew! Loved his line, even if it was stolen. *snicker* Shooting that guy in the foot was funny and I loved how he wanted to kill Robin for hurting Faith. The s.o.b deserves to die, he really does.

Excellent story! More soon? *hopeful look*